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Education, from preschool through university, should be paid for by the government and therefore free to students. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.3

Education, from preschool through university, should be paid for by the government and therefore free to students. v. 3
All the expenses of education from preschool through university should be paid by the government and the education cost must be free for all the students. Although I agree with the statement, budget and revenue generated by the government must be considered. However, education is a basic necessity of every individual. Providing education for free give rise to productive individuals without any difficulties. While, poor people fight with food, water, and other daily necessities, free education lowers their struggle for education. Moreover, The educated person contributes to the development of the country efficiently. Nevertheless, providing education for free may decrease its value and students might take it for granted. In that case, testing the knowledge of the person and funding accordingly might encourage students to work hard. On the other hand, Educating every citizen might cost more than the budget of education for some developing countries like India. In such cases, although, primary schooling fee is paid by the government. High school and University fee must be paid only by testing the skill set of an individual. For instance, in countries like India, many exams are conducted to check students skillset and fund him accordingly. In addition, the Students funded by the government must be thankful and they must help the government to provide education to future students. To conclude, free education can be supportive of the poor to complete their education without any difficulty, On the other hand, free education might reduce its value towards students. I agree with providing free education based on the skillset rather than giving it for free.
All the expenses of
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from preschool through university should
be paid
by the
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government
and the
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education
cost
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must
be
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free
for all the
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students
. Although I
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agree
with the statement, budget and revenue generated by the
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government
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must
be considered
.

However
,
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education
is a basic necessity of every individual. Providing
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education
for
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free
give rise to productive individuals without any difficulties. While, poor
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people
fight with food, water, and other daily necessities,
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free
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education
lowers their struggle for
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education
.
Moreover
, The educated person contributes to the development of the country
efficiently
.
Nevertheless
, providing
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education
for
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free
may decrease its value and
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students
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might
take it for granted.
In that case
, testing the knowledge of the person and funding
accordingly
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might
encourage
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students
to work
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hard
.

On the other hand
, Educating every citizen
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might
cost more than the budget of
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education
for
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some
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developing countries
like India. In such cases, although, primary schooling fee
is paid
by the
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government
. High school and University fee
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must
be paid
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only
by testing the
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skill
set of an individual.
For instance
, in countries like India,
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many
exams
are conducted
to
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check
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students
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skillset
and fund him
accordingly
.
In addition
, the
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Students
funded by the
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government
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must
be
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thankful and
they
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must
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help
the
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government
to provide
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education
to future students.

To conclude
,
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free
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education
can be supportive of the poor to complete their
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education
without any difficulty,
On the other hand
,
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free
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education
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might
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reduce
its value towards
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students
. I
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agree
with providing
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free
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education
based on the
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skillset
rather
than giving it for
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free
.
14Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
36Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Education, from preschool through university, should be paid for by the government and therefore free to students. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
263 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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