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Some people say it is a good idea for all employees to wear a uniform at work. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.1

Some people say it is a good idea for all employees to wear a uniform at work. v. 1
Wearing uniform in workplace is compulsory for the employees in a few organizations. While it is sometimes thought that it will feel them dull and boring. In my opinion, I strongly agree with people who prefer to wear dress code. In this essay I will give some arguments in favor to support my opinion. Team building is key advantage in a company uniform is the staff morale and comradely. When people wear the same type of work clothing they feel they are part of a team. Therefore, It instills a sense of belonging and pride in the job and company. Uniforms level the playing field and no matter where you sit in the chain of command you feel valuable and a massive sense of team spirit. For instance, the international companies such as "Maghrabi" which is optical company, this company managers and staff have the same dress code they work as one hand because they feel are in same category no difference between them. If all the companies forcing wear uniform, it will make increase on productivity. On the other hand, one of merits of wearing uniform is less consumption of money and time of worker. This is because they do not need to waste their time while choosing a different clothes for their workplaces every day and also they can save a great amount of money by stop purchasing too many items of clothing. For example, while working the company forced the uniform to the worker that helped us to save time and money. in contrast, the company I work with it now. In addition to that, a uniform can promote the brand name and it can make the company widely known amongst the general public. The increased brand recognition will certainly boost the sales and revenue. If the individuals upholding this idea, it will be more beneficial in exploitation of time and money. In conclusion, wearing dress code is a topic which is very relevant to modern society. However, I feel that the best way to solve this issue is by agreeing with the company to make this idea easy to implement. If the individuals implement this policy, it will provide a better life for future generations.
Wearing
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in workplace is compulsory for the employees in a few organizations. While it is
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sometimes
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thought
that it will
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feel
them dull and boring. In my opinion, I
strongly
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agree
with
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people
who prefer to wear dress code. In this essay I will give
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some
arguments in favor to support my opinion.

Team building is key advantage in a
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company
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uniform
is the staff morale and
comradely
.
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When
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people
wear the same type of work clothing they
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feel
they are part of a team.
Therefore
, It instills a sense of belonging and pride in the job and
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company
.
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Uniforms
level the playing field and no matter where you sit in the chain of command you
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feel
valuable and a massive sense of team spirit.
For instance
, the international
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companies
such as
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Maghrabi
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which is optical
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company
, this
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company
managers and staff have the same dress code they work as one hand
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because
they
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feel
are in same category no difference between them. If all the
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companies
forcing wear
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uniform
, it will
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make
increase on productivity.

On the other hand
, one of merits of wearing
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uniform
is less consumption of money and
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time
of worker. This is
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because
they do not need to waste their
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time
while choosing a
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different
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clothes
for their workplaces every day and
also
they can save a great amount of money by
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stop
purchasing too
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many
items of clothing.
For example
, while working the
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company
forced the
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uniform
to the worker that
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helped
us to save
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time
and money.
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in
contrast, the
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company
I work with it
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now
.
In addition
to that, a
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uniform
can promote the brand name and it can
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make
the
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company
widely
known amongst the
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general public
. The increased brand recognition will
certainly
boost the sales and revenue. If the individuals upholding this
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idea
, it will be more beneficial in exploitation of
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time
and money.

In conclusion
, wearing dress code is a topic which is
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very
relevant to modern society.
However
, I
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feel
that the best way to solve this issue is by agreeing with the
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company
to
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make
this
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idea
easy to implement. If the individuals implement this policy, it will provide a better life for future generations.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
26Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people say it is a good idea for all employees to wear a uniform at work. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
369 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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