We are living in a capitalist world where we sell a third of our days in order to live during the rest. It is suggested by psychology coteries that we are lonelier than ever and as a result of this, depression is now at unprecedented levels. As social creatures we need companions, however, it is now unarguably hard to find time to spend for our relationships - and even worse for ourselves. In my opinion, this is the main reason for people to have pets since they don't judge you for not allotting time for them; all you need to do is to feed and fondle them. However, some people believe that confining pets within walls is wrong and they should not be kept in houses. My personal view is that they are extremely beneficial especially to who live alone.
First of all, as I stated previously, we are spending our times mostly at our jobs and we don't even have enough time for ourselves let alone our friends. Many people have hard times to maintain their relationships and friendships. As a corollary of this, we are now more alone. It is a known fact that lonely people are more prone to depression and suicidal thoughts. I feel that having a pet which can sit on your legs and let you fondle itself can disperse all negative feelings.
Secondly, taking a responsibility of someone or something matures people. You simply have something to care for and live for. In addition, pets can also replace the babies for those who cannot have one. Therefore, they can also satiate the need of bringing up an offspring and being parents.
In conclusion, I feel that pets are a good companion for those who live alone especially for those who harbour depression and thought of suicide. Their love and taking their responsibilities can make people grown-ups and cure their psychologies damaged by their lonely lives.
We are living in a capitalist world where we sell a third of our days in order to
live
during the rest. It
is suggested
by psychology coteries that we are lonelier than ever and
as a result
of this, depression is
now
at unprecedented levels. As social creatures we need companions,
however
, it is
now
unarguably
hard
to find
time
to spend for our relationships
-
and even worse for ourselves. In my opinion, this is the main reason for
people
to have
pets
since they don't judge you for not allotting
time
for them; all you need to do is to feed and fondle them.
However
,
some
people
believe that confining
pets
within walls is
wrong and
they should not be
kept
in
houses
. My personal view is that they are
extremely
beneficial
especially
to
who
live
alone.
First of all
, as I stated previously, we are spending our
times
mostly
at our
jobs and
we don't even have
enough
time
for ourselves
let
alone our friends.
Many
people
have
hard
times
to maintain their relationships and friendships. As a corollary of this, we are
now
more alone. It is a known fact that lonely
people
are more prone to depression and suicidal thoughts. I feel that having a pet which can sit on your legs and
let
you fondle itself can disperse all
negative
feelings.
Secondly
, taking a responsibility of someone or something matures
people
. You
simply
have something to care for and
live
for.
In addition
,
pets
can
also
replace the babies for those
who
cannot have one.
Therefore
, they can
also
satiate the need of bringing up an offspring and being parents.
In conclusion
, I feel that
pets
are a
good
companion for those
who
live
alone
especially
for those
who
harbour
depression and
thought
of suicide. Their
love
and taking their responsibilities can
make
people
grown-ups and cure their psychologies damaged by their lonely
lives
.
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