In this day and age, more and more contemporary attention has been placed on the phenomenon that many adults and particularly in children have been playing video games. While I accepted that these games have a few benefits of their provisions, but I strongly believe that the negative effects of these games are more adverse than the positive sides.
It is clear that these video games have some advantages for entertaining and educational. To be more specific, the potential visual games helping people blend into the other dimension of virtual world, which makes people's brains are creative in their work as well as enhances their productivity. In addition, it not only helps humans easily concentrate on their jobs, but also creates the ideal workplaces for them. Furthermore, the high- quality education sometimes also depends on these games, which promotes the children to have fun after the long school day, especially in the curriculum of students are bombarded with too much information.
I believe that the harmful factors of video games outweigh the benefits. Firstly, the attractive games are decorated with colourful imaginations and extremely facts to attract the player, particularly in children who have a potential level of high addiction. They generate a several challenging tasks that make users constantly progress their levels until they are satisfied and they also easily prone into the competing tasks with their peers which stimulate them want to win their enemies. Furthermore, they have been sacrificed a more hours in favour of their assignments to complete their duties on the games. Finally, It not only leads them to intentional addiction, but also alleviates them toward the sedentary lifestyle as well as increases the level of obesity disease. Therefore, the drawbacks of playing video games account for a higher rate than the good sides.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the potential dangers of video games are more significant than the possible benefits.
In this day and age, more and more contemporary attention has
been placed
on the phenomenon that
many
adults and
particularly
in children have been playing
video
games
. While I
accepted
that these
games
have a few benefits of their provisions,
but
I
strongly
believe that the
negative
effects of these
games
are more adverse than the
positive
sides.
It is
clear
that these
video
games
have
some
advantages for entertaining and educational. To be more specific, the potential visual
games
helping
people
blend into the other dimension of virtual world, which
makes
people
's brains are creative in their work
as well
as enhances their productivity.
In addition
, it not
only
helps
humans
easily
concentrate on their jobs,
but
also
creates the ideal workplaces for them.
Furthermore
, the high- quality education
sometimes
also
depends on these
games
, which promotes the children to have fun after the long school day,
especially
in the curriculum of students
are
bombarded with too much information.
I believe that the harmful factors of
video
games
outweigh the benefits.
Firstly
, the attractive
games
are decorated
with
colourful
imaginations and
extremely
facts to attract the player,
particularly
in children who have a potential level of high addiction. They generate a several challenging tasks that
make
users
constantly
progress their levels until they are
satisfied and
they
also
easily
prone into the competing tasks with their peers which stimulate them want to win their enemies.
Furthermore
, they have
been sacrificed
a more hours in
favour
of their assignments to complete their duties on the
games
.
Finally
, It not
only
leads them to intentional addiction,
but
also
alleviates them toward the sedentary lifestyle
as well
as increases the level of obesity disease.
Therefore
, the drawbacks of playing
video
games
account for a higher rate than the
good
sides.
In conclusion
, it seems to me that the potential
dangers
of
video
games
are more significant than the possible benefits.