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some people prefer to shop for food in supermarket, other people prefer to do food shopping online? DIscuss both views and give your opinion v.1

some people prefer to shop for food in supermarket, other people prefer to do food shopping online? 1
Daily bread has become an integral part of our lives nowadays. Some individuals prefer to buy groceries in the supermarket, while others prefer to purchase food buy online shopping. This essay will discuss the above mentioned both views in further detail. I agree, that it is better to shop for foodstuffs in a market rather than buying online. On one hand, people opine that it is beneficial to visit the shops to purchase necessary materials, because we can identify the defective ones and choose the non-defective ones wisely. In addition, we can bargain for any product with the shopkeeper in these places and get a fair discount on the product. Furthermore, we can get the fresh stock of fruits and vegetables if we get it from the stores. For example, a survey report submitted by the agency, stated that about 85% of people in Ghana buy their groceries from shops. On the other hand, others animadvert that it is better to spend funds for shopping online, as it saves an enormous amount of time and the food is delivered at your doorstep. Moreover, you don't need to bargain and you will get an online discount on everything. For instance, a survey report submitted by the Jio, stated that about 90% of people in India prefer to buy the eating materials by online methods. In conclusion, this essay discussed why shopping online has its benefits, but why shopping in market centres is ultimately superior. I agree, that it is better to shop for foodstuffs in a market rather than buying online.
Daily bread has become an integral part of our
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lives
nowadays.
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Some
individuals prefer to
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buy
groceries in the supermarket, while others prefer to
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purchase
food
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buy
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online
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shopping
. This essay will discuss the above mentioned both views in
further
detail. I
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agree
, that it is better to shop for foodstuffs in a market
rather
than buying online.

On one hand,
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people
opine that it is beneficial to visit the shops to
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purchase
necessary materials,
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because
we can identify the defective
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ones
and choose the non-defective
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ones
wisely
.
In addition
, we can bargain for any product with the shopkeeper in these places and
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get
a
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fair
discount on the product.
Furthermore
, we can
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get
the fresh stock of fruits and vegetables if we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
it from the stores.
For example
, a survey report submitted by the agency, stated that about 85% of
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people
in Ghana
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buy
their groceries from shops.

On the other hand
, others animadvert that it is better to spend funds for
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shopping
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online
, as it saves an enormous amount of time and the food
is delivered
at your doorstep.
Moreover
, you don't need to bargain and you will
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get
an
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online
discount on everything.
For instance
, a survey report submitted by the
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Jio
, stated that about 90% of
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people
in India prefer to
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buy
the eating materials by
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online
methods.

In conclusion
, this essay discussed why
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shopping
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online
has its benefits,
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but
why
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shopping
in market
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centres
is
ultimately
superior. I
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agree
, that it is better to shop for foodstuffs in a market
rather
than buying
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online
.
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8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes
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IELTS essay some people prefer to shop for food in supermarket, other people prefer to do food shopping online? 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
260 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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