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Some people prefer to read from paper books. Whilr others like to read eBooks. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. v.2

Some people prefer to read from paper books. Whilr others like to read eBooks. v. 2
In modern times, the issue of reading from paper books or e-books has highly argument. There are those who prefer classical way of reading from paper books, while others like technical way. In this essay, I will examine both sides of view and give my personal opinion. On one hand, there are wide range of reasons why people prefer e-books; perhaps the main reason is that easy access to them by different devices such as cell phones which is very useful everywhere whole day. To illustrate, when someone waiting for appointment or setting at transportation it is easily to access to e-books due to his smart phone. Therefore, I believe that the easier to access to e-books, the more you read. On the other hand, there is strong opinion of why another slice of people prefers reading from paper books because of variety reasons, but the essential reason is the originality of reading from paper books. They feel relax with original sense of reading that paper books give. Another reason support this idea is paper books are healthier to the eyes than e-books, because the radiation of electronic devices screens which not exist in paper books. In conclusion, this topic which is very relevant with modern society. Despite the features of reading from paper books, my personal view is that e-books are the best choice to me because they offer very effective way to read more in different convenient situations.
In modern times, the issue of
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reading
from paper
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or e-books has
highly
argument. There are those who prefer classical way of
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reading
from paper
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books
, while others like technical way. In this essay, I will examine both sides of view and give my personal opinion.

On one hand, there are wide range of
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reasons
why
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people
prefer e-books; perhaps the main
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reason
is that easy access to them by
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different
devices such as cell phones which is
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very
useful everywhere whole day. To illustrate, when someone waiting for appointment or setting at transportation it is
easily
to access to e-books due to his smart phone.
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of variety
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,
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the essential
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is the originality of
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from paper
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. They feel relax with original sense of
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that paper
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give. Another
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support this
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is paper
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are healthier to the eyes than e-books,
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the radiation of electronic devices screens which not exist in paper books.

In conclusion
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very
relevant with modern society. Despite the features of
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from paper
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books
, my personal view is that e-books are the best choice to me
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because
they offer
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effective way to read more in
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18Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some people prefer to read from paper books. Whilr others like to read eBooks. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
240 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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