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Some people think that e-books are the death of paper books while others think that paper books will never disappear. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. v.3

Some people think that e-books are the death of paper books while others think that paper books will never disappear. v. 3
In the era of cyberspace, e-books are gaining popularity. Though some people anticipate that with the evolution of e-books, traditional paper books have lost their popularity. While others opine that digital books cannot replace reading printed books. This essay will discuss the views. With the progress in science, e-books are a boon for budding writers and readers. Factors like technological convenience and environment can be kept into consideration. As everything is available with one click online, readers can have access to a vast variety of books in an online library. Moreover, with deforestation at its peak, cutting down more trees for publishing books can be harmful to the environment. Therefore, e-books are pocket-friendly, eco-friendly and convenient to use. At the same time, some oppose that e-books do not deliver the same physicality and tangibility as a real book. In addition, the feeling of owning a book is quite different from surfing the online library. The concentration level of the reader and better understanding of the characters is part of reading a printed book. There are millions of books available in the market and some of the ancient manuscripts cannot be translated into digital forms. Therefore, though e-books are vivid and colourful, they cannot provide the same impact as physical books to the bookworms. To conclude, I believe that both traditional books and digital books have their own readers. Since the present generation is more technology savvy, youngsters tend to use digital books. Even though e-books have a flourishing future, physical paper books will never disappear completely.
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some
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people
anticipate that with the evolution of e-books, traditional paper
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books
have lost their popularity.
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While
others opine that digital
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books
cannot replace reading printed
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books
. This essay will discuss the views.

With the progress in science, e-books are a boon for budding writers and readers. Factors like technological convenience and environment can be
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kept
into consideration. As everything is available with one click online, readers can have access to a vast variety of
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books
in an online library.
Moreover
, with deforestation at its peak, cutting down more trees for publishing
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books
can be harmful to the environment.
Therefore
, e-books are pocket-friendly, eco-friendly and convenient to
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use
.

At the same time,
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some
oppose that e-books do not deliver the same physicality and tangibility as a real
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book
.
In addition
, the feeling of owning a
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book
is quite
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different
from surfing the online library. The concentration level of the reader and better understanding of the characters is part of reading a printed
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book
. There are millions of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
available in the market and
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some of the
ancient manuscripts cannot
be translated
into digital forms.
Therefore
, though e-books are vivid and
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colourful
, they cannot provide the same impact as physical
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books
to the bookworms.

To conclude
, I believe that both traditional
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books
and digital
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books
have their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
readers. Since the present generation is more technology savvy, youngsters tend to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
digital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
.
Even though
e-books have a flourishing future, physical paper
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books
will never disappear completely.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay Some people think that e-books are the death of paper books while others think that paper books will never disappear. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
256 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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