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Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment? v.23

Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment? v. 23
Living in a house is always more enjoyable than living in a flat or apartment building. Person like to live in a house, while others think that there are more facilities living in an apartment. This essay will be talking about good outcomes and drawbacks of living in both options house and apartment respectively. Nowadays, it is becoming a dream to own a house which is more safe and demanding. For example, there are more spaces and privacy all-time available. A person can make or create their home by their own interest and taste, while it is impossible in an apartment building. They can get easy access in everywhere, make a garden, and making a playground regarding their choices. However, there are some disadvantages also. Like as, a house is always higher price than flat and demand huge cost for maintenance but it can be manageable though. The demand of apartment flat is increasing dramatically for the effectiveness of affording. For instance, Any medium range salary job holder or an average income individual like to having a space in an apartment because easily they can adjust it with their monthly cost and earnings. But the concern is that there is ample amount of negative outcomes such as, low privacy since huge people are living over there and have to handle crowd or adjust to that and barely they get silence area to think something important. Besides, they never make something according to their self-interest because of the terms and conditions. In conclusion, it can be seen that, both living options have some good or bad sides, but house are more benefits than negative things rather than living in an apartment. For this reason, some human being prefers to live in a house instead of an apartment.
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Living
in a
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house
is always more enjoyable than
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living
in a flat or
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apartment
building. Person like to
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live
in a
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house
, while others
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think
that there are more facilities
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living
in an
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apartment
. This essay will be talking about
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good
outcomes and drawbacks of
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living
in both options
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house
and
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apartment
respectively
.

Nowadays, it is becoming a dream to
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own
a
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house
which is more safe and demanding.
For example
, there are more spaces and privacy all-time available. A person can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
or create their home by their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
interest and taste, while it is impossible in an
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apartment
building. They can
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get
easy access in everywhere,
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make
a garden, and making a playground regarding their choices.
However
, there are
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some
disadvantages
also
. Like as, a
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house
is always higher price than flat and demand huge cost for maintenance
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but
it can be manageable though.

The demand of
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apartment
flat is increasing
dramatically
for the effectiveness of affording.
For instance
, Any medium range salary job holder or an average income individual like to having a space in an
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apartment
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because
easily
they can adjust it with their monthly cost and earnings.
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But
the concern is that there is ample amount of
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negative
outcomes such as, low privacy since huge
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people
are
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living
over there and
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have to
handle crowd or adjust to that and
barely
they
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get
silence area to
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think
something
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important
.
Besides
, they never
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make
something according to their self-interest
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because
of the terms and conditions.

In conclusion
, it can be
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seen
that, both
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living
options have
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some
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good
or
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bad
sides,
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but
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house
are more benefits than
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negative
things
rather
than
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living
in an
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apartment
.
For this reason
,
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some
human being prefers to
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live
in a
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house
instead
of an
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apartment
.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment? v. 23

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
296 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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