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some people prefer to keep in touch with family and friends through email or letter and some through telephone. Which one do you prefer and why? explain in detail. v.1

some people prefer to keep in touch with family and friends through email or letter and some through telephone. Which one do you prefer and why? explain in detail. v. 1
THE NATURAL AESTHETIES OF MANY NATIONS ARE BEING DESTROYED BY OVERCROWDING AND URBANIZATION. THESE NATURAL ASSETS ARE THE SOURCE OF TOURISM TO THE COUNTRIES AS WELL AS GIVES SPECIFIC IDENTITY TO COUNTRY. IN ORDER TO SAVE THESE PLEASANT LANDSCAPES, SPECIAL MEASURES SHOULD BE TAKEN, FIRSTLY, FOR THE PREVENTION OF DESTRUCTION OF NATURAL PLACES BY CORPORATIONS FOR BUSINESS PURPOSE AND INDUSTRIALIZATION. SECONDLY, THE FACILITIES SHOULD BE PROVIDED TO THE PEOPLE LIVING IN THOSE NATURAL SPOTS. THE NATURE NEEDS TO BE PROTECTED. THE BREATHTAKING VIEWS OF NATURE HAS ALWAYS BEEN THE CENTER OF ATTRACTION FOR THE TOURISTS IN ANY COUNTRY. FOR INSTANCE, THE NORTHEREN AREAS OF PAKISTAN ARE HEAVEN FOR TOURISTS. THIS PART OF THE COUNTRY IS FAMOUS FOR ITS UNMATCHED BEAUTY. PEOPLE FROM ALL OVER THE WORLD COME TO VISIT THESE ALLURING PLACES. IN ADDITION, THESE SPOTS BECOME THE TRADE MARK FOR THE COUNTRY. THE STATES ARE IDENTIFIED BY THEIR CHARMING SITES AND SCENES. TO ILLUSTRATE, LARKANA IS FAMOUS FOR MOEN JO DARO WHICH IS AN ARCHEOLOGICAL SITE IN THE PROVINCE OF PAKISTAN, SINDH. THE INNATE BEAUTY OF STATES NEEDS TO STAY ALIVE. THE WELL ORGANIZED STEPS ARE REQUIRED TO SOLVE TWO MAJOR ISSUES, ON ONE HAND, DEFORESTATION OF NATURAL BEAUTY SHOULD BE DISCONTINUED. FOR EXAMPLE, THE BIG COMPANIES SHOULD NOT BE ALLOWED TO USE THEIR PARTICULAR LANDS FOR THEIR MONEYMAKING PROJECTS. ON THE OTHER HAND, INCREASED FACILITIES SHOULD BE PROVIDED TO TE RESIDENTS OF SUCH PLACES. TAKE AN EXAMPLE OF PEOPLE LIVING IN NORTHERN AREAS OF PAKISTAN, THEY DO NOT HAVE HEALTH AND EDUCATION FACILITY THERE, SO, THEY WILL EVENTUALLY MOVE TO URBAN AREAS. ULTIMATELY THERE WILL BE NOBODY TO TAKE CARE OF THOSE SCENERIES. TO CONCLUDE, IN MY OPINION, THE NATURAL POINTS GIVEN EXTRA BENEFIT TO THE COUNTRY IN THE FORM OF TOURISM AND DISTINCTIVENESS. A WELL ESTABLISHED INFRASTRUCTURE SHOULD BE ACQUIRED TO PROVIDE NECESSARY FACILITIES TO THE POPULATION AND URBAN SETTLEMENTS SHOULD NOT BE PROMOTED
THE
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NATURAL
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AESTHETIES
OF
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MANY
NATIONS ARE BEING
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DESTROYED
BY OVERCROWDING AND URBANIZATION. THESE
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NATURAL
ASSETS ARE THE SOURCE OF TOURISM TO THE
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COUNTRIES
AS WELL
AS GIVES SPECIFIC IDENTITY TO
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COUNTRY
. IN ORDER TO SAVE THESE PLEASANT LANDSCAPES, SPECIAL MEASURES SHOULD
BE TAKEN
,
FIRSTLY
, FOR THE PREVENTION OF DESTRUCTION OF
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NATURAL
PLACES BY CORPORATIONS FOR BUSINESS PURPOSE AND INDUSTRIALIZATION.
SECONDLY
, THE FACILITIES SHOULD
BE PROVIDED
TO THE
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PEOPLE
LIVING IN THOSE
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NATURAL
SPOTS.

THE NATURE NEEDS TO
BE PROTECTED
. THE BREATHTAKING VIEWS OF NATURE HAS ALWAYS BEEN THE CENTER OF ATTRACTION FOR THE TOURISTS IN ANY
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COUNTRY
.
FOR INSTANCE
, THE
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NORTHEREN
AREAS OF PAKISTAN ARE HEAVEN FOR TOURISTS. THIS PART OF THE
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COUNTRY
IS
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FAMOUS
FOR ITS UNMATCHED BEAUTY.
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PEOPLE
FROM ALL OVER THE WORLD
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COME
TO VISIT THESE ALLURING PLACES.
IN ADDITION
, THESE SPOTS BECOME THE TRADE MARK FOR THE
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COUNTRY
. THE STATES
ARE IDENTIFIED
BY THEIR CHARMING SITES AND SCENES. TO ILLUSTRATE,
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LARKANA
IS
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FAMOUS
FOR
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MOEN
JO
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DARO
WHICH IS AN ARCHEOLOGICAL SITE IN THE PROVINCE OF PAKISTAN,
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SINDH
.

THE INNATE BEAUTY OF STATES NEEDS TO STAY ALIVE. THE WELL ORGANIZED STEPS
ARE REQUIRED
TO SOLVE TWO MAJOR ISSUES, ON ONE HAND, DEFORESTATION OF
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NATURAL
BEAUTY SHOULD
BE DISCONTINUED
.
FOR EXAMPLE
, THE
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BIG
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COMPANIES
SHOULD NOT BE
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ALLOWED
TO
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USE
THEIR PARTICULAR LANDS FOR THEIR MONEYMAKING PROJECTS.
ON THE OTHER HAND
, INCREASED FACILITIES SHOULD
BE PROVIDED
TO TE RESIDENTS OF SUCH PLACES. TAKE AN EXAMPLE OF
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PEOPLE
LIVING IN NORTHERN AREAS OF PAKISTAN, THEY DO NOT HAVE HEALTH AND EDUCATION FACILITY THERE,
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SO
, THEY WILL
EVENTUALLY
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MOVE
TO URBAN AREAS.
ULTIMATELY
THERE WILL BE NOBODY TO TAKE CARE OF THOSE SCENERIES.

TO CONCLUDE
, IN MY OPINION, THE
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NATURAL
POINTS
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GIVEN
EXTRA BENEFIT TO THE
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COUNTRY
IN THE FORM OF TOURISM AND DISTINCTIVENESS. A WELL ESTABLISHED INFRASTRUCTURE SHOULD
BE ACQUIRED
TO PROVIDE NECESSARY FACILITIES TO THE POPULATION AND URBAN SETTLEMENTS SHOULD NOT BE
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IELTS essay some people prefer to keep in touch with family and friends through email or letter and some through telephone. Which one do you prefer and why? explain in detail. v. 1

Essay
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4 paragraphs
316 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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