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Some people like to work in teams. Others prefer to work alone. Which do you prefer? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.2

Some people like to work in teams. Others prefer to work alone. Which do you prefer? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 2
The outlooks to this topic can be different. Some individuals are willing to work cooperatively, while others take opposing view and have a tendency to fulfill their work solitarily. All of us know that progresses yielded in today’s world are due to taking apart in a teamwork. Now, some aspects of the arguments are discussed as follows. The first thing that come in everyone’s mind is that participating in a collective work not only escalates work’s productivity but also improves the quality of work done by workers. When a work or a research project is accomplished by the members of a group, each one tries to do very well her or his task. This is due to the fact that a great and heavy work is divided into several parts and therefore member’s burden is relatively light compared to as the whole work must be done by one person. This in turn makes that the results obtained to be better and more accurate. However, a collective work sometimes may be annoying for college students who lack any precise schedule, because they rarely adjust their time to be present in the workplace on time. So, this partly is an injustice in right other members of a group. Another reason for taking apart in a teamwork is that ability and skills people definitely are different. For example, in the last time that I did a teamwork, we required someone to be skilled in simulation with the Matlab software and someone else to be competent in mathematical calculation, and also we need someone else to present it orally to the audience. So, this allows members of a group to do what they are good at and interested in. Besides, the best important things is that we get to know with other people or college students who have not ever met each other. So, working in a team give a chance to everyone to expand their friendships. Finally, it is obvious and simple to me choosing teamwork activities due to its convenience, association with new colleagues, and high accuracy, yet it may be inconsistent with attitudes of few people.
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different
.
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Some
individuals are willing to
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work
cooperatively
, while others take opposing view and have a tendency to fulfill their
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work
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solitarily
. All of us know that progresses yielded in
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today
’s world are due to taking apart in a
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teamwork
.
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Now
,
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some
aspects of the arguments
are discussed
as follows.

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first
thing that
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come
in everyone’s mind is that participating in a collective
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work
not
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only
escalates
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work’s
productivity
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but
also
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improves
the quality of
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work
done by workers. When a
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work
or a research project
is accomplished
by the
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members
of a group, each one tries to do
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very
well her or his task.
This is due to the fact that
a great and heavy
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work
is divided
into several parts and
therefore
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member’s
burden is
relatively
light compared to as the whole
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work
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must
be done
by one person. This in turn
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makes
that the results obtained to be better and more accurate.
However
, a collective
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work
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sometimes
may be annoying for college students who lack any precise schedule,
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because
they rarely adjust their time to be present in the workplace on time.
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So
, this partly is an injustice in right
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other
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members
of a group.

Another reason for taking apart in a
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teamwork
is that ability and
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skills
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people
definitely are
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different
.
For example
, in the last time that I did a
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teamwork
, we required someone to
be skilled
in simulation with the Matlab software and someone else to be competent in mathematical calculation, and
also
we need someone else to present it
orally
to the audience.
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So
, this
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allows
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members
of a group to do what they are
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good
at and interested in.
Besides
, the best
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important
things is that we
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get
to know with
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other
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people
or college students who have not ever met each
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other
.
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So
, working in a team give a chance to everyone to expand their friendships.

Finally
, it is obvious and simple to me choosing
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teamwork
activities due to its convenience, association with new colleagues, and high accuracy,
yet
it may be inconsistent with attitudes of few
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people
.
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IELTS essay Some people like to work in teams. Others prefer to work alone. Which do you prefer? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
355 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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