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Some people like to stay up late up at night then sleep late in the mornings. Others prefer to go to bed earlier and get up earlier the next day. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your preference. v.2

Some people like to stay up late up at night then sleep late in the mornings. Others prefer to go to bed earlier and get up earlier the next day. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your preference. v. 2
Learning is the process of understanding any topic by writing or reading. It is a never ending process. Some prefer to do the learning at night and stay up all night while others choose to wake up early in the morning to study. In my opinion early morning is the best time for learning due to the fact that during that time I can concentrate, learn fast without any distraction and be refreshed. To start with, learning early morning makes that topic easy to comprehend. It is always easy for me to wake up early in the morning to do my routine study. Besides, there does not exist a boring feeling dwelling in my mind which occurs to me if i stay late night and study. For instance, when I was studying a portion of science after 10pm it was so boring and i felt so difficult to focus. There was a constant sleepy feeling due to which I was not able to finish learning that topic. The same topic I learned quickly in the morning hours. This proves that it is easy for me to grasp and learn better in the morning. Furthermore, the quietness makes morning more suitable for studying. Often disturbances might distract one from concentrating on their area of study. This will result in poor results or less portion covered after studies. For example, morning are usually which makes it easy for me to read and learn a new topic and recollect too since there is pin drop silence. Additionally, there is less chances of being distracted therefore i can easily cover all things to learn for school. To conclude, I would choose to learn morning rather than night because mornings are better to concentrate and learn. Apart from these reasons morning’s are less noisy which makes it an excellent time to study.
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is the process of understanding any
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topic
by writing or reading. It is a never ending process.
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prefer to do the
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learning
at
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night
and stay up all
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night
while others choose to wake up
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early
in the
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morning
to
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study
. In my opinion
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early
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morning
is the best time for
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learning
due to the fact that during that time I can concentrate,
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learn
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fast
without any distraction and
be refreshed
.

To
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start
with,
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learning
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early
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morning
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makes
that
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topic
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easy
to comprehend. It is always
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easy
for me to wake up
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early
in the
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morning
to do my routine
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study
.
Besides
, there does not exist a boring feeling dwelling in my mind which occurs to me if
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i
stay late
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night
and
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study
.
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, when I was studying a portion of science after 10pm it was
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so
boring and
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i
felt
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so
difficult to focus. There was a constant sleepy feeling due to which I was not able to finish
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learning
that
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topic
. The same
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topic
I learned
quickly
in the
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morning
hours. This proves that it is
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easy
for me to grasp and
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learn
better in the morning.

Furthermore
, the quietness
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makes
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morning
more suitable for studying.
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Often
disturbances might distract one from concentrating on their area of
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study
. This will result in poor results or less portion covered after
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studies
.
For example
,
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morning
are
usually
which
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makes
it
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easy
for me to read and
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learn
a new
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topic
and recollect too since there is pin drop silence.
Additionally
,
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of
being distracted
therefore
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i
can
easily
cover all things to
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learn
for school.

To conclude
, I would choose to
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learn
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morning
rather
than
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night
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because
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mornings
are better to concentrate and
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learn
. Apart from these reasons
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morning’s
are less noisy which
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makes
it an excellent time to
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study
.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
48Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people like to stay up late up at night then sleep late in the mornings. Others prefer to go to bed earlier and get up earlier the next day. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your preference. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
307 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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