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Some film companies spend millions of dollars on the production of a single movie. Is it necessary to spend a lot of money to make a good movie? What factors contribute to the success of a movie? v.6

Some film companies spend millions of dollars on the production of a single movie. Is it necessary to spend a lot of money to make a good movie? What factors contribute to the success of a movie? v. 6
It is argued whether big budget is required to make a good cinema. In my personal opinion, I feel that when a movie in made on a grand scale, it automatically makes for a good watch. This essay explores my point of view with examples in order to substantiate my claim. A movie made with a big budget will have a celebrity star cast. The success of a flick is dependent on many factors such as visual effects, story and screenplay and most importantly, the star cast. People visit cinema halls more often to see their favourite actors in action. A star studded line-up ensures that the theatres are packed for at least few weeks making it successful commercially. For example, the star cast of Avengers series, made it an instant crowd puller, thereby ensuring it a grand success commercially. More emphasis is given to the visual effects in a large scale movie. Audiences nowadays want to watch a movie more for its utilization of computer graphics than for its storytelling technique. A big budget automatically ensures that the quality of visual effects is top notch. For example, the computer graphics used in the movie Avatar gave it a Wow factor, thereby making the audiences glued to the screens. To conclude, a picture with a big production value, makes for an appealing watch both in terms of the stars being cast and also in terms of better visual effects, thereby ensuring that it becomes a blockbuster in the cine market.
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is argued
whether
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big
budget
is required
to
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make
a
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cinema. In my personal opinion, I feel that when a
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movie
in made on a grand scale, it
automatically
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makes
for a
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good
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watch
. This essay explores my point of view with examples in order to substantiate my claim.

A
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movie
made with a
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big
budget will have a celebrity star
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cast
. The success of a flick is dependent on
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many
factors such as visual effects, story and screenplay and most
importantly
, the star
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cast
.
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People
visit cinema halls more
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often
to
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see
their
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favourite
actors in action. A
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star studded
line-up ensures that the
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theatres
are packed
for at least few weeks making it successful
commercially
.
For example
, the star
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cast
of Avengers series, made it an instant crowd puller, thereby ensuring it a grand success
commercially
.

More emphasis is
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given
to the visual effects in a large scale
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movie
. Audiences nowadays want to
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watch
a
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movie
more for its utilization of computer graphics than for its storytelling technique. A
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big
budget
automatically
ensures that the quality of visual effects is
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
top notch
.
For example
, the computer graphics
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used
in the
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movie
Avatar gave it a Wow factor, thereby making the audiences glued to the screens.

To conclude
, a picture with a
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big
production value,
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makes
for an appealing
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watch
both in terms of the
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stars
being
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cast
and
also
in terms of better visual effects, thereby ensuring that it becomes a blockbuster in the cine market.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay Some film companies spend millions of dollars on the production of a single movie. Is it necessary to spend a lot of money to make a good movie? What factors contribute to the success of a movie? v. 6

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
250 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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