Noawadays entertainment industries are gorwing in every country across the globe. Some people belive that actors, singers and sports person should pay more money. I agree that they deserve such a huge amount but, there are some other professions like armies who put their life in risk should pay higher.
To begin with, in this modern era we have seen significant improvement in the entertainment industries than earlier because of massive improvement in the technology. These are less depends on government and pay high taxes. For instance playing sports in different countries not only it strngthen the economy while collecting money from audience also stronger their tourism industry consequently increase employement opportunities. Similarly, actors and pop musicians increase their profit while arranging different concerts across the world. Thus sportsman and artist make money from spectators therefore government should encourage their efforts performance while providing them required facilities.
Secondly, there is other profession that should not be ignoring paying them extra such as national army who put their life on risk. Protection is the essential priority of each individual because without proper security we can not enjoy our life despite having full entertainment facilities. Paying them low wage it will lose their motivation therefore it is the responsibility of the government increasing defence budget to make our national heroes more poweful. For instance in united state the average army income is 10% higher than other profession that make US army one of the stronges in the world.
In conclusion, artist make a lot of money which is less rely on government and paying that boost country economy however human life is more important so I belive that strengthen the militiry force may secure our country.
Noawadays
entertainment industries are
gorwing
in every
country
across the globe.
Some
people
belive
that actors, singers and sports person should pay more
money
. I
agree
that they deserve such a huge amount
but
, there are
some
other professions like
armies
who put their
life
in
risk
should pay higher.
To
begin
with, in this modern era we have
seen
significant improvement in the entertainment industries than earlier
because
of massive improvement in the technology. These are less depends on
government
and pay high taxes.
For instance
playing sports in
different
countries
not
only
it
strngthen
the economy while collecting
money
from audience
also
stronger their tourism industry
consequently
increase
employement
opportunities.
Similarly
, actors and pop musicians increase their profit while arranging
different
concerts across the world.
Thus
sportsman and artist
make
money
from spectators
therefore
government
should encourage their efforts performance while providing them required facilities.
Secondly
, there is other profession that should not be ignoring paying them extra such as national
army
who put their
life
on
risk
. Protection is the essential priority of each individual
because
without proper security we can not enjoy our
life
despite having full entertainment facilities. Paying them low wage it will lose their motivation
therefore
it is the responsibility of the
government
increasing
defence
budget to
make
our national heroes more
poweful
.
For instance
in united state the average
army
income is 10% higher than other profession that
make
US
army
one of the
stronges
in the world.
In conclusion
, artist
make
a lot of
money
which is less rely on
government
and paying that boost
country
economy
however
human
life
is more
important
so
I belive
that strengthen the
militiry
force may secure our
country
.
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