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Some people cliam that not enough of the water from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their wast v.1

Some people cliam that not enough of the water from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. 1
According to me, environment play a vital role in human being life. Today, there are umpteen things use in the life like pastic bags, rubbish and polythene. There are plethora reasons behind it. I will discuss my point of view in upcoming paragraph. In the sophisticated era, nowadays, all age group use the transportion system in daily rountine. Hence, there are two categories of transportion system like public and private. Aferthat, all adolescent use the vehicle in their life. But also, vehicle are cause pollution surrounding the areas. Therefore, they are very detrimental in dwellers life. For instance, hypertension, anxiety, Obesity, cardiac and depression so on. Nevertheless, some people believe that it is good law government make waste use the recycled material. Then, They are very good effect all the general because it they use a waste material like plastic bags, polythne and rubbish and products raw material etc. Last but not the least, teacher learn to the pupil waste material recycled use are easily use it in their life. In my opinion, parents is like a god. All as well, all teenager go their footprints in their parents. otherwise, parents should be ask to the children waste from homes is recycled and toddlers are use material it is very beneficial in their future. In summarise, after analysing that issue reckon, I think that, dweller use the recycled material in their homes and schools. In my opinion, pupil could be learn recycling material use it their life and it is reduce the pollution day by day. Then, they are save the money. they use the recycling material. I believe that government allow this law are benefits to human life.
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According to me
, environment play a vital role in human being
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life
.
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Today
, there are umpteen things
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use
in the
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life
like
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pastic
bags, rubbish and polythene. There are plethora reasons behind it. I will discuss my point of view in upcoming paragraph.

In the sophisticated era, nowadays, all age group
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use
the
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transportion
system in daily
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rountine
.
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, there are two categories of
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transportion
system like public and private.
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Aferthat
, all adolescent
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use
the vehicle in their
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life
.
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But
also
, vehicle are cause pollution surrounding the areas.
Therefore
, they are
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very
detrimental in dwellers
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life
.
For instance
, hypertension, anxiety, Obesity, cardiac and depression
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so
on.

Nevertheless
,
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some
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people
believe that it is
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good
law
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government
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make
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waste
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use
the
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recycled
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material
. Then, They are
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very
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good
effect all the general
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because
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it
they
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use
a
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waste
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material
like plastic bags,
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polythne
and rubbish and products raw
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material
etc. Last
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but
not the least, teacher learn to the pupil
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waste
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material
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recycled
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use
are
easily
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use
it in their
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life
. In my opinion, parents is like a god. All
as well
, all
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teenager
go their footprints in their parents.
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otherwise
, parents should be
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ask to
the children
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waste
from homes is
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recycled
and toddlers are
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use
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material
it is
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very
beneficial in their future.

In
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summarise
, after
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analysing
that issue reckon, I
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think
that, dweller
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use
the
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recycled
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material
in their homes and schools. In my opinion, pupil could be
Consider using the past participle "learned", "learnt"?
learn
If 'learn' is used as a verb, it usually requires the infinitive: "to recycle".
recycling
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material
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use
it their
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life
and it is
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reduce
the pollution day by day. Then, they are
The word "save" is a verb. Did you mean the adjective "safe"?
save
the money.
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they
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use
the recycling
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material
. I

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believe
that
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government
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allow
this law are benefits to human
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life
.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
23Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people cliam that not enough of the water from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
279 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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