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Some people say that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? v.3

Some people say that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. v. 3
The best way to promote recycling from homes is one of the main concerns in the modern world. According to some, this is more likely to be achieved with the help of some seminars and education. And there may be some merit in this view. Yet, in what follows it will be argued that the government ought to adopt strict laws for waste recycling, as this will encourage more people to recycle and there will be certain punishments against each violation of these laws. The authorities should have mandatory recycling laws, since more people will start to follow them. Many studies have shown that laws against resources waste had positive influence on peoples recycling habits. For instance, enforcing a law to have several types of recycling bins enables people to separate the garbage, as some part of this waste can be utilized again, after undergoing some cleaning procedures. Therefore, legislating strong policies can result in increased number of people who will consider recycling more wisely. Another possible way that enacting laws can motivate people to recycle waste might be done by punishments. it is not hard to note that implementing certain sanctions against breaking certain rules will lead to decline in the number of law violations. Thus, when people realize that they may lose financially if they don’t recycle enough waste from their apartments, they will develop their recycling habits. In conclusion, it was demonstrated that the government will be able to make people recycle their waste by applying relevant laws, since more and more people will start to recycle from homes, otherwise, they will be aware that they will get punished. Though some believe that legal requirements might not be enough, other options should be considered as well such as education and advertising, still, mandatory recycling laws are the best solution to this issue so far.
The best way to promote
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recycling
from homes is one of the main concerns in the modern world. According to
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some
, this is more likely to
be achieved
with the
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help
of
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some
seminars and education. And there may be
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some
merit in this view.
Yet
, in what follows it will
be argued
that the
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government
ought to adopt strict
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laws
for
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waste
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recycling
, as this will encourage more
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people
to
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recycle
and there will be certain punishments against each violation of these laws.

The authorities should have mandatory
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recycling
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laws
, since more
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people
will
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start
to follow them.
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Many
studies have shown that
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laws
against resources
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waste
had
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positive
influence on
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peoples
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recycling
habits.
For instance
, enforcing a
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law
to have several types of
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recycling
bins enables
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people
to separate the garbage, as
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some
part of this
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waste
can
be utilized
again, after undergoing
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some
cleaning procedures.
Therefore
, legislating strong policies can result in increased number of
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people
who will consider
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recycling
more
wisely
.

Another possible way that enacting
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laws
can motivate
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people
to
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recycle
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waste
might
be done
by punishments.
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it
is not
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hard
to note that implementing certain sanctions against breaking certain
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rules
will lead to decline in the number of
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law
violations.
Thus
, when
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people
realize that they may lose
financially
if they don’t
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recycle
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
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waste
from their apartments, they will develop their
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recycling
habits.

In conclusion
, it
was demonstrated
that the
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government
will be able to
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make
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people
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recycle
their
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waste
by applying relevant
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laws
, since more and more
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people
will
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start
to
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recycle
from homes,
otherwise
, they will be aware that they will
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get
punished. Though
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some
believe that legal requirements might not be
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enough
, other options should
be considered
as well
such as education and advertising,
still
, mandatory
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recycling
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laws
are the best solution to this issue
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so
far.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
36Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people say that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
307 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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