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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their wast v.36

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. 36
There is an ongoing controversy about whether the government should make the waste recycling a legal requirement for the residents. Someone disagree with this idea, claiming that it should be people’s right to choose their own waste management. However, in my opinion, I think it’s better for the government to make it a law for several reasons. First, with the law, it is easier to manage the waste from domestic use. These days, the residential areas are scatter all over the city, making it’s harder to get the management done effectively. For instance, in the past century, people in Thailand tended to live near the rivers, but now people can live anywhere because there are sufficient facilities, such as water and electricity, available. So the authorities, who are responsible for waste management, have to work at many different areas, spending more time to deal with the problems. So, it would be easier for the government to impose the law about recycling the waste in order to reduce the authorities’ jobs that may cause by the complex urban area right now. Second, resident’s recycling can create financial benefits to the country. Instead of investing on new waste incineration plants to serve the increasing waste from the increasing population, enforcing people to recycle their own trashes help the country save the costs. There was an report in Thailand about the waste problems in some area that the volume of waste that need to be eliminate is now exceed the incineration’s capacity, leaving the wastes unclear and creating the pollution to the city. This problem won’t happen if the resident is responsible for their own wastes. Clearly, it’s better to make the recycling the law requirement. In conclusion, there’re many advantages of imposing the law about waste recycling. It makes the government easier to manage the waste and it has financial benefit to do so. Therefore, I am strongly convinced that law requirement for recycling the waste is needed.
There is an ongoing controversy about whether the
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government
should
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make
the
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waste
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recycling
a legal requirement for the residents. Someone
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disagree
with this
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idea
, claiming that it should be
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people’s
right to choose their
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own
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waste
management.
However
, in my opinion, I
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think
it’s better for the
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government
to
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make
it a
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law
for several reasons.

First
, with the
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law
, it is easier to manage the
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waste
from domestic
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use
. These days, the residential
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areas
are scatter all over the city, making
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it’s
harder to
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get
the management done
effectively
.
For instance
, in the past century,
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people
in Thailand tended to
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live
near the rivers,
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but
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now
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people
can
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live
anywhere
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because
there are sufficient facilities, such as water and electricity, available.
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So
the authorities, who are responsible for
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waste
management,
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have to
work at
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many
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different
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areas
, spending more time to deal with the problems.
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So
, it would be easier for the
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government
to impose the
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law
about
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recycling
the
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waste
in order to
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reduce
the authorities’ jobs that may cause by the complex urban
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area
right
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now
.

Second, resident’s
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recycling
can create financial benefits to the country.
Instead
of investing on new
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waste
incineration plants to serve the increasing
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waste
from the increasing population, enforcing
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people
to recycle their
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own
trashes
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help
the country save the costs. There was
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an
report in Thailand about the
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waste
problems in
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some
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area
that the volume of
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waste
that need to be
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eliminate
is
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now
exceed the incineration’s capacity, leaving the
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wastes
unclear and creating the pollution to the city. This problem won’t happen if the resident is responsible for their
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own
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wastes
.
Clearly
, it’s better to
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make
the
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recycling
the
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law
requirement.

In conclusion
, there’re
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many
advantages of imposing the
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law
about
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waste
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recycling
. It
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makes
the
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government
easier to manage the
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waste
and it has financial benefit to do
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so
.
Therefore
, I am
strongly
convinced that
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law
requirement for
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recycling
the
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waste
is needed
.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
42Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. 36

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
326 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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