Some people claim that goverments should be responsible for taking care of the essential needs of the elderly, while others argue that it should be the elderly that should do so. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. v.1
Some people claim that goverments should be responsible for taking care of the essential needs of the elderly, while others argue that it should be the elderly that should do so. v. 1
Some people suggest that governments have the duty to help the elderly, whereas others argue that old people should do it themselves. In my opinion, the state should be responsible for this task, regardless of being a pensioner.
On the one hand, all citizens pay a lot of money as taxes to their own government, whether directly or indirectly. Some of them pay a higher income tax because they earn more money, but in fact all products and services are already taxed. Whether we work or not, we contribute to the financial system of our country. Because of this, we all deserve to be cared in old age. Some may be paid a bigger pension because of their former career, but at least the essential needs of the rest should be met by the state.
On the other hand, the average lifespan of human beings is growing at an increasingly fast rate. Advances in healthcare and nutrition allow us to live much longer. But, this poses a threat to the government budget. In the past, the proportion of pensioners and the elderly made up a tiny part of the population even in developed nations. But, today, especially in rich European countries, they make up more than 30% of the total. It seems that the percentage of the working members will be lower than the rest. Such a system is not sustainable in the long run. So, in the future, all the elderly may have to take care of themselves.
In my opinion, governments should have the responsibility to look after the elderly. If taxpayers will be ignored when they need help the most, then there is no point in contributing to the state budget. It is illogical and unfair to support a system that will eventually ditch you. Yet, I also think that everybody should save some money for the future. In a few decades, it will not be possible for all governments to provide a decent pension.
In conclusion, not all people agree about the role of governments in helping the elderly. But, I believe that both parties play a cruical role in this issue.
Some
people
suggest that
governments
have the duty to
help
the
elderly
, whereas others argue that
old
people
should do it themselves. In my opinion, the state should be responsible for this task, regardless of being a pensioner.
On the one hand, all citizens pay
a lot of
money as taxes to their
own
government
, whether
directly
or
indirectly
.
Some
of them pay a higher income tax
because
they earn more money,
but
in fact all products and services are already taxed. Whether we work or not, we contribute to the financial system of our country.
Because of this
, we all deserve to
be cared
in
old
age.
Some
may
be paid
a bigger pension
because
of their former career,
but
at least the essential needs of the rest should
be met
by the state.
On the other hand
, the average lifespan of human beings is growing at an
increasingly
fast
rate. Advances in healthcare and nutrition
allow
us to
live
much longer.
But
, this poses a threat to the
government
budget. In the past, the proportion of pensioners and the
elderly
made up a tiny part of the population even in developed nations.
But
,
today
,
especially
in rich European countries, they
make
up more than 30% of the total. It seems that the percentage of the working members will be lower than the rest. Such a system is not sustainable in the long run.
So
, in the future, all the
elderly
may
have to
take care of themselves.
In my opinion,
governments
should have the responsibility to look after the
elderly
. If taxpayers will be
ignored
when they need
help
the most, then there is no point in contributing to the state budget. It is illogical and unfair to support a system that will
eventually
ditch you.
Yet
, I
also
think
that everybody should save
some
money for the future. In a few decades, it will not be possible for all
governments
to provide a decent pension.
In conclusion
, not all
people
agree
about the role of
governments
in helping the
elderly
.
But
, I believe that both parties play a
cruical
role in this issue.
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