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Some people claim that not enough of their waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement. 1
Healthy mind lives in a healthy body. The dynamics of fitness routines of an individual has been changed rampantly over the years. Nowadays people are more physical health conscious and concerned for their healthiness. A healthy person may be defined as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoids stress. In a country like India, these habits varies from man to man. To begin with, it has been seen that the dramatic change in the health aspects is solely due to the availability of amenities. In the past the amenities were not so vast and consequently, people remain unfit. However, in today's scenario, the cases are different. A human being obtains a proper well being due to numerous reasons. Firstly, good diet, every individual has a penchant for scrumptious food but it should be avoided, these taste contains various problems such as obesity and laziness. The eating habits must be controlled and one should eat, green vegetables, fruits and should drink lots of water. Secondly, exercise routines, one must do plenty of workout. Likewise, meditation, jogging, morning or evening walks and gym helps the person to attain good physic. Moreover, the most important aspect is the stress, facts and figures show that from the recent past, people are having more hectic schedules and more work load which often leads to mental pressure. It acts as a bane. The pressure is killing the peace of mind and because of this an individual become more vulnerable to diseases. Moving further, a country like India, the health concerns vary among the humans. India is considered as a youth's country, but it also comprises of the old. Currently, the youngsters are considered as health freak and on the other hand older people also take care of their health. The different significant ways through which different age group keeps them fit are as follows. First and the foremost, the youth's, the future of a nation. It has been seen that gym and the health clubs are opened at a wild pace over the countryside in recent years solely because of the demand of the youngster's group. This prior category, sweat out mostly in the gym or by opting a sport at the health club. Also by avoiding fast food and drinks help an individual to lead a fruitful life. These parameters help them to remain healthy. Additionally, the meditation centres and yoga clubs also play pivotal role in healthy living. Furthermore, the most experienced class of the society that is the elderly people, they usually prefer to do light exercise like walking and jogging. It has been observed that most of the elderly people follow the same routine. Early morning walks and balanced diet play a crucial role in keeping older people fit. To recapitulate, I would like to say that its upon the individual to remain fit. Several ways are introduced nowadays. But the most important is by opting healthy diet and good exercise on a daily basis.
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mind
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lives
in a
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healthy
body. The dynamics of fitness routines of an
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individual
has been
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changed
rampantly
over the years. Nowadays
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people
are more physical
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health
conscious and concerned for their healthiness. A
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healthy
person may
be defined
as someone who has a
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good
diet,
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gets
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plenty
of
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exercise
and avoids
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stress
. In a country like India, these habits varies from
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man
to
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man
.

To
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begin
with, it has been
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seen
that the dramatic
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change
in the
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health
aspects is
solely
due to the availability of amenities. In the past the amenities were not
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so
vast and
consequently
,
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people
remain unfit.
However
, in
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today
's scenario, the cases are
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different
. A human being obtains a proper
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well being
due to numerous reasons.
Firstly
,
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good
diet, every
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individual
has a penchant for scrumptious food
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but
it should
be avoided
, these taste contains various problems such as obesity and laziness. The eating habits
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must
be controlled
and one should eat, green vegetables, fruits and should drink lots of water.
Secondly
,
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exercise
routines, one
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must
do
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plenty of workout
.
Likewise
, meditation, jogging, morning or evening walks and gym
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helps
the person to attain
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good
physic.
Moreover
, the most
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important
aspect is the
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stress
, facts and figures
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show
that from the recent past,
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people
are having more hectic schedules and more work load which
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often
leads to mental pressure. It acts as a bane. The pressure is killing the peace of mind and
because of this
an
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individual
become more vulnerable to diseases.

Moving
further
, a country like India, the
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health
concerns vary among the humans. India
is considered
as a youth's country,
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but
it
also
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comprises of
the
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old
.
Currently
, the youngsters
are considered
as
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health
freak and
on the other hand
older
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people
also
take care of their
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health
. The
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different
significant ways through which
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different
age group
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keeps
them fit are as follows.
First
and the foremost, the youth's, the future of a nation. It has been
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
that gym and the
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health
clubs
are opened
at a wild pace over the countryside in recent years
solely
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of the demand of the youngster's group. This prior category, sweat out
mostly
in the gym or by opting a sport at the
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health
club.
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Also
by avoiding
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fast
food and drinks
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help
an
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individual
to lead a fruitful life. These parameters
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help
them to remain
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healthy
.
Additionally
, the meditation
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centres
and yoga clubs
also
play pivotal role in
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healthy
living.
Furthermore
, the most experienced
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class
of the society
that is
the elderly
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people
, they
usually
prefer to do light
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exercise
like walking and jogging. It has
been observed
that most of the elderly
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people
follow the same routine. Early morning walks and balanced diet play a crucial role in keeping older
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people
fit.

To recapitulate, I would like to say that its upon the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
individual
to remain fit. Several ways
are introduced
nowadays.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
the most
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
is by opting
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healthy
diet and
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good
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exercise
on a daily basis.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay Some people claim that not enough of their waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
498 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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