There are some arguments about how to reduce traffic jam. Some people propose that new and wider roads should be built, others believe that developing systems of public transportation such as train or subway lines is a more effective solution. Personally, I am inclined to the latter view.
Admittedly, building wider roads, to some extent, is a good way to tackle road congestion. However, it seems to simply be a stop-gap method. The effect of this solution is only temporary because along with the growth of population and economy, the number of private vehicles will continuously increase which will quickly fill up the roads again. As a consequence, traffic jam will eventually recur. Moreover, enlarging or constructing new roads requires new land, which is inherently a limited resource in crowded cities.
On the other hand, developing public transport systems as train or subway lines ensures long-term benefits. It has been proven that using public transport brings about many advantages for the communities. For instance, public transport provides an affordable and time-saving alternative to driving and helps to reduce gasoline consumption as well as carbon emission. For such outstanding benefits, people will certainly be willing to adapt to this kind of transportation provided that governments can offer a reliable and efficient service to meet their demand. Additionally, owing to the huge capacity of public transportation, which can carry up to hundreds or even thousands of passengers, a train or a subway in operation would mean hundreds or thousands of cars being taken off roads. As a result, traffic congestion would be significantly reduced.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that investing in public transport is the best method to mitigate traffic jams. 
There are  
some
 arguments about how to  
reduce
  traffic
 jam.  
Some
  people
 propose that new and wider  
roads
 should  
be built
, others believe that developing systems of  
public
 transportation such as train or subway lines is a more effective solution.  
Personally
, I  
am inclined
 to the latter view. 
Admittedly
, building wider  
roads
, to  
some
 extent, is a  
good
 way to tackle  
road
 congestion.  
However
, it seems to  
simply
 be a  
stop
-gap method. The effect of this solution is  
only
 temporary  
because
 along with the growth of population and economy, the number of private vehicles will  
continuously
 increase which will  
quickly
 fill up the  
roads
 again. As a consequence,  
traffic
 jam will  
eventually
 recur.  
Moreover
, enlarging or constructing new  
roads
 requires new land, which is  
inherently
 a limited resource in crowded cities. 
On the other hand
, developing  
public
  transport
 systems as train or subway lines ensures long-term benefits. It has  
been proven
 that using  
public
  transport
 brings about  
many
 advantages for the communities.  
For instance
,  
public
  transport
 provides an affordable and time-saving alternative to driving and  
helps
 to  
reduce
 gasoline consumption  
as well
 as carbon emission. For such outstanding benefits,  
people
 will  
certainly
 be willing to adapt to this kind of transportation provided that  
governments
 can offer a reliable and efficient service to  
meet
 their demand.  
Additionally
, owing to the huge capacity of  
public
 transportation, which can carry up to hundreds or even thousands of passengers, a train or a subway in operation would mean hundreds or thousands of cars  
being taken
 off  
roads
.  
As a result
,  
traffic
 congestion would be  
significantly
  reduced
. 
In conclusion
, I  
strongly
 believe that investing in  
public
  transport
 is the best method to mitigate  
traffic
 jams. 
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