Opinions are divided on whether by spending money on building train and subway lines, government can lower traffic congestion or whether traffic jam will be decreased by focusing on building more and wider roads. While I understand why some people support the former view, I am still in favor of the later.
People who believe that the traffic jam can be declined if authority invests money in public transportations have several arguments. From their point of view, this mode of transportation can carry a lot of passengers at the same time, so it can help reduce the number of people on streets. Another point to be made is CO2 emission from private means is more than the public transports. Therefore, accessing public transport will improve the air quality and limit pollution.
Nevertheless, I still side with those who believe building more and wider roads helps lessen the traffic problem. This is due to the fact that the number of road accidents has gone up annually as the large number of the holes in the road’s surface. Thus, the ministry should use money for improving the quality of the road to ensure the safety of people. Another reason to be given is that widening and constructing new streets can bring many benefits. There will create more spaces for means of transport, so it helps reduce the transport congestion.
In conclusion, despite acknowledging why people think traffic congestion will be diminished by developing more on public transportations, I hold the belief it is better to concentrate on establishing more and broaden roads.
Opinions
are divided
on whether by spending money on building train and subway lines,
government
can lower
traffic
congestion or whether
traffic
jam will
be decreased
by focusing on building more and wider
roads
. While I understand why
some
people
support the former view, I am
still
in favor of the
later
.
People
who believe that the
traffic
jam can
be declined
if authority invests money in
public
transportations have several arguments. From their point of view, this mode of transportation can carry
a lot of
passengers at the same time,
so
it can
help
reduce
the number of
people
on streets. Another point to
be made
is CO2 emission from private means is more than the
public
transports
.
Therefore
, accessing
public
transport
will
improve
the air quality and limit pollution.
Nevertheless
, I
still
side with those who believe building more and wider
roads
helps
lessen the
traffic
problem.
This is due to the fact that
the number of
road
accidents has gone up
annually
as the large number of the holes in the
road’s
surface.
Thus
, the ministry should
use
money for improving the quality of the
road
to ensure the safety of
people
. Another reason to be
given
is that widening and constructing new streets can bring
many
benefits. There will create more spaces for means of
transport
,
so
it
helps
reduce
the
transport
congestion.
In conclusion
, despite acknowledging why
people
think
traffic
congestion will
be diminished
by developing more on
public
transportations, I hold the belief it is better to concentrate on establishing more and broaden
roads
.
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