Many people think that we can use animals whatever want while I believe that everybody must respect and treat animals with kindness and not make them suffer in any way. I believe that animals have rights to live according to their natures without abuse.
To serve human life, people use some animals products which are expensive and rare. A fur coat, such as, comes from animals namely fox, honey badger, caught in traps. The process of producing a fur coat is really a crime. This raises many ethical controversies from animal protectors.
Moreover, we exploits animals, especially endangered animals, will lead to an ecological crisis which will affect human life. For instance, the practice of shark is increasing every year. We harvests sharks for meat, cartilage, liver oil and fins used in medical. The killing of many sharks will cause oceanic ecosystem out of balance by virtue of becoming too great in some other creatures.
Human and animals live on this planet together and always have a relationship. If we want animals respect us, we have to treat them the same way. If we do not halt the use of animals products, we will motivate to generate more alternative materials in the future, as well as new cures in medical.
In conclusion, I believe that animals have rights to live happily without suffering and we must protect them under any circumstances.
Many
people
think
that we can
use
animals
whatever want while I believe that everybody
must
respect and treat
animals
with kindness and not
make
them suffer in any way. I believe that
animals
have rights to
live
according to their natures without abuse.
To serve human life,
people
use
some
animals
products which are expensive and rare. A fur coat, such as,
comes
from
animals
namely
fox, honey badger, caught in traps. The process of producing a fur coat is
really
a crime. This raises
many
ethical controversies from
animal
protectors.
Moreover
, we
exploits
animals
,
especially
endangered
animals
, will lead to an ecological crisis which will affect human life.
For instance
, the practice of shark is increasing every year. We
harvests
sharks for meat, cartilage, liver oil and fins
used
in medical. The killing of
many
sharks will cause oceanic ecosystem out of balance by virtue of becoming too great in
some
other creatures.
Human and
animals
live
on this planet together and always have a relationship. If we want
animals
respect us, we
have to
treat them the same way. If we do not halt the
use
of
animals
products, we will motivate to generate more alternative materials in the future,
as well
as new cures in medical.
In conclusion
, I believe that
animals
have rights to
live
happily
without
suffering and
we
must
protect them under any circumstances.
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12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes