Although, some human being's perspective towards the school authorities that they should teach descendants of the charity, teaching sports and many more. I agree with the statement to a large extent for some reasons. My position is argued further with the explanation.
Out of all the arguments, the strongest one to prove my point is that from this services children can learn helping nature. This is to say, helping nature is beneficial for the pupils in the forthcoming years. Furthermore, they always learn to help the needy people. Moreover, the sophomore is learned social behaviour. By this I mean, they easily connect with all types of people as well as gain experience that they can get after providing lessons. To exemplify that, in the USA the educational sectors have made compulsory to teach pupils to work for charity and improve the neighbourhood. As a result, candidates took part in it and are now having a lot of social experience and are well planned for their future
The other reasons to prove my point is that teamwork is a boon for the development of children. Because, if they do every work in a team then they will able to understand the behaviour of other children. In addition, the fact that by teaching them the programs that sophomores will understand better condition of poor people and provide them useful things.
On the contrary, I would not overlook the other side too. It can be finally say that despite the fact of limited time for studies and affect the career my reasons that helping behaviour as well as teamwork are logically acceptable.
Although,
some
human being's perspective towards the school authorities that they should teach descendants of the charity, teaching sports and
many
more. I
agree
with the statement to a large extent for
some
reasons. My position
is argued
further
with the explanation.
Out of all the arguments, the strongest one to prove my point is that from
this
services children can learn
helping
nature. This is to say, helping nature is beneficial for the pupils in the forthcoming years.
Furthermore
, they always learn to
help
the needy
people
.
Moreover
, the sophomore
is learned
social
behaviour
. By this I mean, they
easily
connect with all types of
people
as well
as gain experience that they can
get
after providing lessons. To exemplify that, in the USA the educational sectors have made compulsory to teach pupils to work for charity and
improve
the
neighbourhood
.
As a result
, candidates
took part
in it and are
now
having
a lot of
social experience and are well planned for their
future
The other reasons to prove my point is that teamwork is a boon for the development of children.
Because
, if they do every work in a team then they
will able
to understand the
behaviour
of other children.
In addition
, the fact that by teaching them the programs that sophomores will understand better condition of poor
people
and provide them useful things.
On the contrary
, I would not overlook the other side too. It can be
finally
say that despite the fact of limited time for studies and affect the career my reasons that helping
behaviour
as well
as teamwork are
logically
acceptable.
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