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Some people believe that ultimatelly all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. v.1

Some people believe that ultimatelly all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. v. 1
Artificially intelligent robots are progressively replacing human in the workforce. While it is possible that all menial jobs will eventually be replaced by robots, it is unlikely that jobs that require human contact will be taken over. This essay will discuss why ultimately only very few jobs will be carried out by people. Robots may ultimately replace all sorts of human labour that does not require specific and complex human skills. Many companies will turn to computer neuralink technologies because it is no doubt true, that is far less expensive than hiring, training and employing a human. In supermarkets in Australia, for example, many cashiers have been replaced by automated stations that cost is minor compared to employees. In addition, these automated stations work around the clock and require neither holidays nor holiday pay, or tax payments such as national insurance payments. For these reasons, jobs that can be replaced by robots will be substituted. Conversely, there are some human jobs that cannot be replaced by robots because this technology will never achieve the capacity to do them. Put it simply, some jobs require a “human touch”. These occupations include psychology, education, medicine and social work to name but a few. Robotics and mechatronics will never get the same results in human to human interaction as what has taken social evolution hundreds of thousands of years to achieve. In conclusion, it is increasingly likely that robots will end most human employment. Unlikely labour will eventually be done entirely by robots; however, sophisticated jobs that require human-specific skills will always exist. Ultimately, very few jobs will be safe in an increasingly artificial intelligent workforce.
Artificially
intelligent robots are
progressively
replacing
human
in the workforce. While it is possible that all menial
jobs
will
eventually
be replaced
by robots, it is unlikely that
jobs
that
require
human
contact will
be taken
over. This essay will discuss why
ultimately
only
very
few
jobs
will
be carried
out by
people
.

Robots may
ultimately
replace all sorts of
human
labour
that does not
require
specific and complex
human
skills
.
Many
companies
will turn to computer
neuralink
technologies
because
it is no doubt true,
that is
far less expensive than hiring, training and employing a
human
. In supermarkets in Australia,
for example
,
many
cashiers have
been replaced
by automated stations that cost is minor compared to employees.
In addition
, these automated stations work around the clock and
require
neither holidays nor holiday pay, or tax payments such as national insurance payments. For these reasons,
jobs
that can
be replaced
by robots will
be substituted
.

Conversely
, there are
some
human
jobs
that cannot
be replaced
by robots
because
this technology will never achieve the capacity to do them. Put it
simply
,
some
jobs
require
a
“human
touch”. These occupations include psychology, education, medicine and social work to name
but
a few. Robotics and mechatronics will never
get
the same results in
human
to
human
interaction as what has taken social evolution hundreds of thousands of years to achieve.

In conclusion
, it is
increasingly
likely that robots will
end
most
human
employment. Unlikely
labour
will
eventually
be done
entirely
by robots;
however
, sophisticated
jobs
that
require
human-specific
skills
will always exist.
Ultimately
,
very
few
jobs
will be safe in an
increasingly
artificial intelligent workforce.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
23Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people believe that ultimatelly all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
273 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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