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Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society while other think people have more responsibility as members of society than only paying taxes.discuses both view and give your own opinion?

Some people believe that they should not pay taxes. or disagree. v. 1
It is necessary to provide taxes to government but most of individuals say that people have many other accountabilities instead of paying taxes. I partially agree with it. This essay is going to discuss view in further paragraphs. To commence with, taxes should be paid because it utilise for the betterment of community. For example, India has plethora of historical or public buildings which need sufficient money to improve it so the authority's fund is used to enhance the infrastructure of the buildings. Addition to, pollution can be reduced by the taxes give to government. For instance, everyone has his own vehicle that they are made journey by these automobiles due to this pollution is increased when it will be complustory to pay taxes then people avoid to travel by private transport. On the other hand, there are numerous duties of person's towards the area such as help to needy people's. Moreover, follow to the rule and regulation is important factor to servive in the society. To illustrate, there is traffic rule that enforced by the government to prevent the road accident. Apart from these duties, vote is next right or responsibility of community's people which help to choose right owner for the area. To conclude, I think, as well as paying texes, people should also vigilante on the other duties like, don't harm to the public property.
It is necessary to provide
taxes
to
government
but
most of individuals
say that
people
have
many
other
accountabilities
instead
of paying
taxes
. I
partially
agree
with it. This essay is going to discuss view in
further
paragraphs. To commence with,
taxes
should
be paid
because
it
utilise
for the betterment of community.
For example
, India has plethora of historical or public buildings which need sufficient money to
improve
it
so
the authority's fund is
used
to enhance the infrastructure of the buildings. Addition to, pollution can be
reduced
by the
taxes
give to
government
.
For instance
, everyone has his
own
vehicle that they
are made
journey by these automobiles due to this pollution
is increased
when it will be
complustory
to pay
taxes
then
people
avoid to travel by private transport.
On the other hand
, there are numerous duties of person's towards the area such as
help
to needy
people
's.
Moreover
, follow to the
rule
and regulation is
important
factor to
servive
in the society. To illustrate, there is traffic
rule
that enforced by the
government
to
prevent
the road accident. Apart from these duties, vote is
next
right or responsibility of community's
people
which
help
to choose right owner for the area.
To conclude
, I
think
,
as well
as paying
texes
,
people
should
also
vigilante on the other duties like, don't harm to the public property.
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IELTS essay Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society while other think people have more responsibility as members of society than only paying taxes. discuses both view and give your own opinion?

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