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Many people say that cooking and eating at home is better for the individual and the family than eating out in restaurants and canteens. Do you agree or disagree? v.2

Many people say that cooking and eating at home is better for the individual and the family than eating out in restaurants and canteens. v. 2
Today's generation believes in eating out in restaurants and canteens rather than cooking and eating at home. I strongly disagree with the above statement, nowadays youths are seen more in restaurants, hotels, canteens rather than home's kitchen because they make themselves busy with other stuffs like watching movies, surfing net on mobile and they hesitate to cook themselves. Moreover, people are getting more discounts and offers from online at a very cheap price and number of varieties which leads to less interest in people to go to their kitchen and cook for themselves. Very often individuals who are studying in colleges and working people as well are mostly seen inside the canteens, cafe and restaurants at lunch hours and dinner too. Every individual has facilities to get their meals at their door steps in a very less time and at a minimal price amount. So it's very clear that outside market is ruled out each and everyone's food habits and their choices. Benefited by public and society, restaurants and canteens are growing rapidly. Most commercial applications are earning in huge out of this. Apart from that, people are there who sticks to hygienic and tasty homemade food. These people are seen healthier and happier with their families and surroundings. Occasionally, they prefer to go restaurant with their dear and near ones to spend some quality time or to attend some function like marriages, birthday parties. In consequences, people are suffering from many unwanted health issues and meanwhile they are forgetting the homemade healthy diet. Due to this outgrowing trend, society is deprived from the family time and gathering. Hence people should make a practice of having healthy home food without wasting ample amount of money at restaurants and canteens, assuring for a good health. "HEALTH IS WEALTH".
Today
's generation believes in eating out in
restaurants
and canteens
rather
than cooking and eating at home.

I
strongly
disagree with the above statement, nowadays youths are
seen
more in
restaurants
, hotels, canteens
rather
than home's kitchen
because
they
make
themselves busy with other stuffs like watching movies, surfing net on
mobile and
they hesitate to cook themselves.
Moreover
,
people
are getting more discounts and offers from online at a
very
cheap
price and number of varieties which leads to less interest in
people
to go to their kitchen and cook for themselves.

Very
often
individuals who are studying in colleges and working
people
as well
are
mostly
seen
inside the canteens,
cafe
and
restaurants
at lunch hours and dinner too. Every individual has facilities to
get
their meals at their door steps in a
very
less time and at a minimal price amount.
So
it's
very
clear
that outside market
is ruled
out each and
everyone
's food habits and their choices. Benefited by public and society,
restaurants
and canteens are growing
rapidly
. Most commercial applications are earning in huge out of this.

Apart from that,
people
are there who sticks to hygienic and tasty homemade food. These
people
are
seen
healthier and happier with their families and surroundings.
Occasionally
, they prefer to go
restaurant
with their dear and near ones to spend
some
quality time or to attend
some
function
like marriages, birthday parties.

In consequences,
people
are suffering from
many
unwanted health issues and meanwhile they are forgetting the homemade healthy diet. Due to this outgrowing trend, society is
deprived from
the family time and gathering.

Hence
people
should
make
a practice of having healthy home food without wasting ample amount of money at
restaurants
and canteens, assuring for a
good
health.

"
HEALTH IS WEALTH
"
.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
13Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay Many people say that cooking and eating at home is better for the individual and the family than eating out in restaurants and canteens. v. 2

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
297 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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