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Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society, while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes. Discuss both views and give your opinion. v.2

Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society, while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes. v. 2
DEVELOPING NATION HASE REQUIRE SOME FUNDS TO DEVELOP COUNTRY SO GOVERNMENT HAS TAKING MONEY FROM TAXES BILL AND ALL PEOPLE HAS ADDITIONALY SOME BURDEN OF THEIR FAMILY AS WLL AS CAREER SO BOTH ARE IMPORTANT IN LIFE PAY LEVY AND LIVE IN SOCIETY. PAYING LEVY IS VERY IMPORTANT TO BE A EVERY CIZIZEN OF A COUNTRY. IT IS A USEFUL TO CONTRIBUTE AND BOOSTING AN ECONOMY BASE ON TARIFF AUTHORITY HAS SPEND MONEY OF LIKE CONSTRUCTION OF ROAD BULDING RAILWAY EIC. . FACILITIES AND ADDITION OF FUNDING IS TO IMPROVING SECURITY SERVICE LIKE ARMY AND POLICE FUND TO PUCHASE LATEST WAPONS AND ALL, BASE ON SHARE OF INCOME ADMINISTRATION IS IMPROVING FACILITIES LIKE PENSION FREE MEDICAL AND GENERATING JOBS IN DIFFERENT SECTORS ETC. . ON THE CONTRORY, THE OTHER PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT THEY HAVE LIMITED EARNINGS TO RUN THEIR FAMILY SO. LIMITED COMPANSATION HASE AFFECT TO FAMILY BUDGET. THEY BELIEVE THAT FEE CHARITY IS WEST OF THEIR SALARY ADDITIONALY SOME MISS USE OF TAX PROFIT SOME POLITICIONS ARE DOING SCAM AND FRAUD. FOR ILLUSTRATION IN INDIA 2 G &3 G SCAM AND MANY POLITICION ARE INVOLVED AND MORE OVER MORE THAN 20000 CR AMOUNTSCAM HOW EVER PEOPLE ARE NOT TRUST OF MINISTRY TO NOT PROPER USE OF THAIR CONTRIBUTION BASED ON THAT EDVIRESE EFFECT OF CITIZION. THEY ARE GOING OF NEGATIVE MIND SET TOWARS CONTRIBUTION. CONCLUED THAT TAX INCOME ARE USE WITH PROPER PLANNING AND ANY OTHER FRAUD OCCURE THAN GOVERNMENT HAS FORM LAW AND TAKE HISTORICAL STEPS TOWARDS GULTY PEOPLE WHO ARE NOT DOING FRAUD AND SCAMS.
DEVELOPING NATION
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HASE
REQUIRE
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SOME
FUNDS TO DEVELOP COUNTRY
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SO
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GOVERNMENT
HAS TAKING MONEY FROM TAXES BILL AND ALL
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PEOPLE
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HAS
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ADDITIONALY
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SOME
BURDEN OF THEIR FAMILY AS
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WLL
AS CAREER
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SO
BOTH ARE
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IMPORTANT
IN LIFE PAY LEVY AND
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LIVE
IN SOCIETY.

PAYING LEVY IS
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VERY
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IMPORTANT
TO BE A EVERY
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CIZIZEN
OF A COUNTRY. IT IS A USEFUL TO CONTRIBUTE AND BOOSTING AN ECONOMY BASE ON TARIFF AUTHORITY HAS
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SPEND
MONEY OF LIKE CONSTRUCTION OF ROAD
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BULDING
RAILWAY EIC.
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.
FACILITIES AND ADDITION OF FUNDING IS
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TO IMPROVING
SECURITY SERVICE LIKE ARMY AND POLICE FUND TO
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PUCHASE
LATEST
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WAPONS
AND ALL, BASE ON SHARE OF INCOME ADMINISTRATION IS IMPROVING FACILITIES LIKE PENSION FREE MEDICAL AND GENERATING JOBS IN
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DIFFERENT
SECTORS ETC.
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.


ON THE
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CONTRORY
, THE OTHER
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PEOPLE
BELIEVE THAT THEY HAVE LIMITED EARNINGS TO RUN THEIR FAMILY
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SO
. LIMITED
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COMPANSATION
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HASE
AFFECT TO FAMILY BUDGET. THEY BELIEVE THAT FEE CHARITY IS WEST OF THEIR SALARY
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ADDITIONALY
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SOME
MISS
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USE
OF TAX PROFIT
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SOME
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POLITICIONS
ARE DOING SCAM AND FRAUD. FOR ILLUSTRATION IN INDIA 2 G &3 G SCAM AND
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MANY
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POLITICION
ARE INVOLVED
AND MORE OVER MORE THAN 20000 CR
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AMOUNTSCAM
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HOW EVER
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PEOPLE
ARE NOT TRUST OF MINISTRY TO NOT PROPER
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USE
OF
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THAIR
CONTRIBUTION BASED ON THAT
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EDVIRESE
EFFECT OF
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CITIZION
. THEY ARE GOING OF
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NEGATIVE
MIND SET
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TOWARS
CONTRIBUTION.

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CONCLUED
THAT TAX INCOME ARE
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USE
WITH PROPER PLANNING AND ANY OTHER FRAUD
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OCCURE
THAN
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GOVERNMENT
HAS FORM LAW AND TAKE HISTORICAL STEPS TOWARDS
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GULTY
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PEOPLE
WHO ARE NOT DOING FRAUD AND SCAMS.
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
27Mistakes
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IELTS essay Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society, while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
258 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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