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Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn, and should not have to pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.4

Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn, and should not have to pay tax to the state. v. 4
Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn, and should not have to pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree? There are people living in different countries who often asks themselves 'Why should we give decent part of our salary to the state? '. It could be no clear why taxes are existing but nevertheless they are important for the functioning of the whole nation of each particular country. I think that taxes are a necessary part of our life and without them we could end up in a very bad situation. Some may say 'If we had this money we would be better at managing them than the government! ' But I think it is not true for most of them. Quite a few people in the world have appropriate education for creating and managing long-term plans when we talk about money. Also, when we pay the tax we supporting not only our future, but also the life of the other people too. In my opinion the main reason why we should pay taxes is a availability of public services. For example, public transport, education, medicine etc. All these things can't exist without taking part of a income people of the country. Of course to have all these things working properly government has to do its job at good level. In conclusion, I believe that taxes are important part of the modern world. Without it, any big city couldn't exist today. Also, all of this is true only if the government of the state doing their things right.
Some
people
believe that they should be able to
keep
all the money they earn, and should not
have to
pay
tax
to the state.

To what extent do you
agree
or disagree?

There are
people
living in
different
countries who
often
asks themselves 'Why should we give decent
part
of our salary to the state? '. It could be no
clear
why
taxes
are existing
but
nevertheless
they are
important
for the functioning of the whole nation of each particular country.

I
think
that
taxes
are a necessary
part
of our life and without them we could
end
up in a
very
bad
situation.

Some
may say 'If we had this money we would be better at managing them than the
government
! '

But
I
think
it is not true for most of them. Quite a few
people
in the world have appropriate education for creating and managing long-term plans when we talk about money.
Also
, when we pay the
tax
we supporting
not
only
our future,
but
also
the life of the other
people
too.

In my opinion the main reason why we should pay
taxes
is
a
availability of public services.
For example
, public transport, education, medicine etc. All these things can't exist without taking
part
of
a
income
people
of the country.
Of course
to have all these things working
properly
government
has to
do its job at
good
level.

In conclusion
, I believe that
taxes
are
important
part
of the modern world. Without it, any
big
city couldn't exist
today
.
Also
, all of this is true
only
if the
government
of the state doing their things right.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
15Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn, and should not have to pay tax to the state. v. 4

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
272 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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