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Some people believe that the higher a product is priced, the more likely it is that people will want to buy it. To what extent does price influence potential buyers? What other factors influence people to buy a product? v.5

Some people believe that the higher a product is priced, the more likely it is that people will want to buy it. What other factors influence people to buy a product? v. 5
Consumer behaviour has been researched over the past few decades. It is possible to affect people to make a decision about purchasing a product by reason of its price. The essay will also discuss other aspects which have an impact on the customer's buying. There are two different types of the situations which customers attempt to buy expensive commodity. Firstly, using exorbitant products represents people's social state. For example, wealthy families always keep up with new trends as they have to fit into their rich community. Secondly, a rare good or a limited edition product is likely to attract people to purchase without considering its price. This is because the goods will enhance their value after a couple of few years. People think these special items as an investment, which results in the price is not really an issue to influence their choice. On the other hand, other factors, such as the quality of the products and brand name, also have their impacts on the consumer's decision. There is no doubt that the majority of consumers always pursue a well- quality commodity and desire to have a brand name one. A high quality product not only can be used much longer, but also gives a convenient use for people's lives. In terms of brand name products, sometimes it is a key factor to attract people to buy as it can be resold in the second hand market. In conclusion, although some specific consumers tend to buy exorbitant goods due to show their social state and seem them as an investment, other factors also play an important part of role in affecting buying choice.
Consumer
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behaviour
has
been researched
over the past few decades. It is possible to affect
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people
to
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make
a decision about purchasing a
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product
by reason of its price. The essay will
also
discuss
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other
aspects which have an impact on the customer's buying.

There are two
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different
types of the situations which customers attempt to
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buy
expensive commodity.
Firstly
, using exorbitant
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products
represents
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people
's social state.
For example
, wealthy families always
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keep
up with new trends as they
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have to
fit into their rich community.
Secondly
, a rare
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good
or a limited edition
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product
is likely to attract
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people
to
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purchase
without considering its price. This is
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because
the
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goods
will enhance their value after a couple of few years.
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People
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think
these special items as an investment, which results in the price is not
really
an issue to influence their choice.

On the
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other
hand,
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other
factors, such as the quality of the
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products
and brand name,
also
have their impacts on the consumer's decision. There is no doubt that the majority of consumers always pursue a well- quality commodity and desire to have a brand name one. A high quality
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product
not
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only
can be
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used
much longer,
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but
also
gives a convenient
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use
for
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people
's
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lives
. In terms of brand name
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products
,
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sometimes
it is a key factor to attract
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people
to
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buy
as it can be resold in the second hand market.

In conclusion
, although
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some
specific consumers tend to
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buy
exorbitant
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goods
due to
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show
their social state and seem them as an investment,
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other
factors
also
play an
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important
part of role in affecting buying choice.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people believe that the higher a product is priced, the more likely it is that people will want to buy it. What other factors influence people to buy a product? v. 5

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
273 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
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Lexical Resource: 8.5
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Grammatical Range: 8.5
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Task Achievement: 8.5
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