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Some people believe that the higher a product is priced, the more likely it is that people will want to buy it. To what extent does price influence potential buyers? What other factors influence people to buy a product? v.3

Some people believe that the higher a product is priced, the more likely it is that people will want to buy it. What other factors influence people to buy a product? v. 3
It is considered by some people that increasing the price of a product make it to be purchased more by people. Price of an item excessively affects its purchasing rate. There are other factors such as its quality and its quality and advertisement. Price of a product greatly influenced the number of its purchasing. If an item is being decide to be sell at a high price, it is more likely that people would opt more to buy it. This is because they judge the quality and features of an item just by its cost, without giving much attention to how good it is in real. In other words, people think that if a product is available at a high rate, it must be of extraordinary quality and comprise of best features. A recent report by International Economics Institution, for instance, showed that customers tend to buy a product up to 50%, just by knowing that it is costly. There are certain other factors which are critical for a product to be purchased. Firstly, the quality of a product is one of the main reasons people buy it. They opt for an item mostly when it is available in a high quality. That is to say, qualities of an item such as, from what kind of material it is made and how much it is comfortable in the case of some products are the driving forces people buy it. Nike Company Sweaters, for example, are purchased more by individuals because of its best and comfortable material. Secondly, advertising greatly encouraged people to buy a product. Highly exaggerated items through advertisement enormously affect people to think about buying an item, as it gives them informed choices. A product may not be in a very good quality but if it is showed to the people in social and mass media, it would eventually become a choice of many people. A survey by Dutch International, as an illustration, showed that 45% of product’s purchasing directly depend on how it is advertised. In conclusion, few individuals believe that the more a product is priced higher, the more it would be purchased. Cost of a product profoundly affect its buying rate, since people consider it to be better in quality. The quality and advertising of a product also are the key factors to make an item purchased more.
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excessively
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quality
and its
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quality
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greatly
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item
is being
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decide
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sell
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people
would opt more to
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buy
it. This is
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quality
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item
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by its cost, without giving much attention to how
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good
it is in real.
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people
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think
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best features. A recent report by International Economics Institution,
for instance
,
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showed
that customers tend to
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a
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up to 50%,
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by knowing that it is costly.

There are certain other factors which are critical for a
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to be
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purchased
.
Firstly
, the
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quality
of a
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product
is one of the main reasons
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people
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buy
it. They opt for an
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mostly
when it is available in a high
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quality
.
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to say,
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qualities
of an
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item
such as, from what kind of material it
is made
and how much it is comfortable in the case of
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products
are the driving forces
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people
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buy
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Sweaters,
for example
, are
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purchased
more by individuals
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because
of its best and comfortable material.
Secondly
, advertising
greatly
encouraged
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people
to
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a
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product
.
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exaggerated
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items
through advertisement
enormously
affect
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people
to
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about buying an
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, as it gives them informed choices. A
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product
may not be in a
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if it is
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to the
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in social and mass media, it would
eventually
become a choice of
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many
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people
. A survey by Dutch International, as an illustration,
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showed
that 45% of
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product’s
purchasing
directly
depend on how it
is advertised
.

In conclusion
, few individuals believe that the more a
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product
is priced
higher, the more it would be
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purchased
. Cost of a
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product
profoundly
affect its buying rate, since
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people
consider it to be better in
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quality
. The
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quality
and advertising of a
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product
also
are the key factors to
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an
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purchased
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12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
52Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people believe that the higher a product is priced, the more likely it is that people will want to buy it. What other factors influence people to buy a product? v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
393 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
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