Some people believe that, the best way to reduce crimes is to give longer prison sentences to those who commit crimes or any similar actions, while others believe that there are other ways that can be used in order to reduce this issue. v.1
Some people believe that, the best way to reduce crimes is to give longer prison sentences to those who commit crimes or any similar actions, while others believe that there are other ways that can be used in order to reduce this issue. v. 1
Some people believe that, the best way to reduce crimes is to give longer prison sentences to those who commit crimes or any similar actions, while others believe that there are other ways that can be used in order to reduce this issue. This essay will discuss both view and it will give my personal opinions.
On the one hand, some people believe that, if it was given a life sentence to all criminals, there would be less crime on streets because a potential criminal would consider the risk to be in jail for the rest of his life before commit a crime. I partially agree with this statement as people become criminals due to lack of education, poverty and mental disturbs, no matter of what the consequences they will have after being taken by the police are. However, I believe that, a life sentence is essential for those who commit a crime because, it is not given any chance to repeat such actions in the future.
On the other hand, some people believe that the development of social welfare system is the key to prevent crimes as poverty leads to crime. Firstly, they believe what governments should help poor people giving them an economic subsidy. Secondly, people believe that most of criminals have always had a mental disturbs and if a society had had the chance to cure them in the past, they would not have committed such crimes in the future. I agree with both statement as many people turn to crime due to poverty and mental disorders.
In conclusion, I believe that, prevention is better than cure and it is the responsibility of governments to discourage criminal actions helping and educating their citizens since their young age. Nevertheless, for those who have already committed a crime it is essential to do not give them any chance to be released.
Some
people
believe
that, the best way to
reduce
crimes
is to give longer prison sentences to those who commit
crimes
or any similar actions, while others
believe
that there are other ways that can be
used
in order to
reduce
this issue. This essay will discuss both view and it will give my personal opinions.
On the one hand,
some
people
believe
that, if it was
given
a life sentence to all
criminals
, there would be less
crime
on streets
because
a potential
criminal
would consider the
risk
to be in jail for the rest of his life
before
commit a
crime
. I
partially
agree
with this statement as
people
become
criminals
due to lack of education, poverty and mental disturbs, no matter of what the consequences they will have after
being taken
by the police are.
However
, I
believe
that, a life sentence is essential for those who commit a
crime
because
, it is not
given
any chance to repeat such actions in the future.
On the other hand
,
some
people
believe
that the development of social welfare system is the key to
prevent
crimes
as poverty leads to
crime
.
Firstly
, they
believe
what
governments
should
help
poor
people
giving them an economic subsidy.
Secondly
,
people
believe
that most of
criminals
have always had
a mental
disturbs and if a society had had the chance to cure them in the past, they would not have committed such
crimes
in the future. I
agree
with both statement as
many
people
turn to
crime
due to poverty and mental disorders.
In conclusion
, I
believe
that, prevention is better than cure and it is the responsibility of
governments
to discourage
criminal
actions helping and educating their citizens since their young age.
Nevertheless
, for those who have already committed a
crime
it is essential to do not give them any chance to
be released
.
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30Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes