Opinions are divided on whether allowing high school students to choose subjects which they want to study or requiring all subjects. Although it is usually a good choice to educate them on diverse fields, I strongly believe that the subjects they are interested in would be better.
On the one hand, different various areas bring tremendous benefits because of several reasons linked to bright prospects and lessen the mistakes. With regard to the first idea, by collecting all school subjects provide young adults with basic knowledge to have a better insight about specialized areas they plan to pursue after high school so that they have more opportunity to get ideal jobs in the future. The second point is that most of them are immature and unable to resist the temptations so they are not ready to make an important decision, which can lead them to study a wrong way and make a lot of knock-on effects easily.
Aside from aforementioned arguments, my belief is that it is more useful for teenage students focusing on some fields that they really want to. This is because after finishing primary education, students are able to be aware of these subjects they adore and they intend to make an effort to study them with full of energy in order to get good results. Further evidence is seen in the fact that the more teachers teach them some areas they do not like, the more likely they neglect them and feel bored. As a consequence that they would not stick with their studies and become poor qualified.
In conclusion, I would argue that there is a lot of way to teach teenager students in high school. However, requiring them to study the disciplines they would like to can be more realistic than all disciplines.
Opinions
are divided
on whether allowing high
school
students
to choose
subjects
which they want to
study
or requiring all
subjects
. Although it is
usually
a
good
choice to educate them on diverse fields, I
strongly
believe that the
subjects
they
are interested
in would be better.
On the one hand,
different
various areas bring tremendous benefits
because
of several reasons linked to bright prospects and lessen the mistakes. With regard to the
first
idea
, by collecting all
school
subjects
provide young adults with basic knowledge to have a better insight about specialized areas they plan to pursue after high
school
so
that they have more opportunity to
get
ideal jobs in the future. The second point is that most of them are immature and unable to resist the temptations
so
they are not ready to
make
an
important
decision, which can lead them to
study
a
wrong
way and
make
a lot of
knock-on effects
easily
.
Aside from aforementioned arguments, my belief is that it is more useful for teenage
students
focusing on
some
fields that they
really
want to. This is
because
after finishing primary education,
students
are able to be aware of these
subjects
they
adore and
they intend to
make
an effort to
study
them with full of energy in order to
get
good
results.
Further
evidence is
seen
in the fact that the more teachers teach them
some
areas they do not like, the more likely they neglect them and feel bored. As a consequence that they would not stick with their
studies
and become poor qualified.
In conclusion
, I would argue that there is
a lot of
way to teach
teenager
students
in high
school
.
However
, requiring them to
study
the disciplines they would like to can be more realistic than all disciplines.
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