Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are good at or that they find the most interest. Discuss the both views and give your opinion. v.12
Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are good at or that they find the most interest. Discuss the both views and give your opinion. v. 12
In the modern world, although many school pupils are all concentrating on the subject in order to take high marks, others feel that focusing on particular subjects which they good at or they find the most interesting is beneficial, as they can use their knowledge in the future. Personally, I believe that students should focus on the certain subjects, as they can develop these spheres in the future.
On the one hand, it is true that during the academic years, students should develop their skills which they will need in the forthcoming. In this regard, they are able to not participate in some lectures and themes, as they will not need them. Furthermore, some pupils only good at certain topics. For example, humanitarian people are not good at technical themes. In addition, in order to get the job in the future, students should develop their interpersonal skills such as communication and collaboration.
On the other hand, individuals can be a really gifted person. I this case, many people believe that they should pay attention to all topics. Moreover, the high GPA will be a determining factor, when applying to the Master degree. To illustrate, many universities ask for extra certificates, when students intent to study abroad. In addition to this, the authorities should make school curriculum depending on students’ abilities and capabilities in order to not overload pupils’ mindset.
In conclusion, although many people believe that focusing particular area is beneficial, a high GPA is needed when students are willing to get a Master degree. However, personally, in my opinion, the school authorities should make syllabus understandable for everyone.
In the modern world, although
many
school pupils are all concentrating on the subject in order to take high marks, others feel that focusing on particular subjects which they
good
at or
they find the most interesting is beneficial, as they can
use
their knowledge in the future.
Personally
, I believe that
students
should focus on the certain subjects, as they can develop these spheres in the future.
On the one hand, it is true that during the academic years,
students
should develop their
skills
which they will need in the forthcoming. In this regard, they are able to not participate in
some
lectures and themes, as they will not need them.
Furthermore
,
some
pupils
only
good
at certain topics.
For example
, humanitarian
people
are not
good
at technical themes.
In addition
, in order to
get
the job
in the future
,
students
should develop their interpersonal
skills
such as communication and collaboration.
On the other hand
, individuals can be a
really
gifted person.
I
this case,
many
people
believe that they should pay attention to all topics.
Moreover
, the high GPA will be a determining factor, when applying to the Master degree. To illustrate,
many
universities
ask for
extra certificates, when
students
intent to study abroad.
In addition
to this, the authorities should
make
school curriculum depending on
students’
abilities and capabilities in order to not overload pupils’ mindset.
In conclusion
, although
many
people
believe that focusing particular area is beneficial, a high GPA
is needed
when
students
are willing to
get
a Master degree.
However
,
personally
, in my opinion, the school authorities should
make
syllabus understandable for everyone.
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8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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