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Some people believe that taxing companies, which cause it, is the best way to reduce industrial pollution while some suggest that there are several other ways to solve this trouble. Discuss both the views and give your opinion. v.3

Some people believe that taxing companies, which cause it, is the best way to reduce industrial pollution while some suggest that there are several other ways to solve this trouble. v. 3
In our newfangled society, With the proliferation of human' s living standard, a profound propulsion is also seen in hazardous pollutants brought by the unrelenting nature of technology. In this regard, some pupils surmise imposing mammoth taxes on the companies who are responsible for pollution is the exemplary way to alleviate this menace. However, others contends' there are plenty of different ways to solve this deteriorated conditions. I moderately accede with former notion, but I believe there must be some other way also to dwindle this problem. First of all, Authorities should make gigantic tax slab for industries, factories and companies which are owned by private business men, entrepreneur and so on to cushion the unhealthy gases. The primary reason for this viewpoint is to decrease the emission of industrial waste by controlling the unwanted debris which is not demanded. Another cause for concern is the climate change effected by this detrimental litters. To illustrate, After GST in India, there is a huge decrement in industrial waste on quarterly basis shown by a report. With scarce means of profit warned by undemanded products and amenities, companies may restrict themselves to affect the atmosphere. Contrastively, By blossoming strict norms other than taxation and other safety procedures, it is virtually possible to stop contaminated waste and pollution evacuated by factories and industries. Nowadays, companies do not consider or take care of safety methods to control the eviction of pollution and litters released in lakes and sea. After applying secured way to production and several government norms industries are trying their best to control the detrimental pollutants in America. Constructive norms and precautions may help defaulters to release the waste in sparsely manner. To recapitulate, this essay discussed both sides of view with my perception. Therefore, I do surmise other ways than taxation are more instrumental than former thoughts.
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seen
in hazardous pollutants brought by the unrelenting nature of technology. In this regard,
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some
pupils surmise imposing mammoth taxes on the
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companies
who are responsible for pollution is the exemplary
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to alleviate this menace.
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also
to dwindle this problem.

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First of all
, Authorities should
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make
gigantic tax slab for industries, factories and
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companies
which are
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owned
by private business
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men
, entrepreneur and
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so
on to cushion the unhealthy gases. The primary reason for this viewpoint is to decrease the emission of industrial
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waste
by controlling the unwanted debris which is not demanded. Another cause for concern is the climate
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
effected by this detrimental litters. To illustrate, After GST in India, there is a huge decrement in industrial
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waste
on quarterly basis shown by a report. With scarce means of profit warned by
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undemanded
products and amenities,
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companies
may restrict themselves to affect the atmosphere.

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Contrastively
, By blossoming strict norms
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other
than taxation and
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other
safety procedures, it is
virtually
possible to
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stop
contaminated
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waste
and pollution evacuated by factories and industries. Nowadays,
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companies
do not consider or take care of safety methods to control the eviction of pollution and litters released in lakes and sea. After applying secured
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way
to production and several
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
norms industries are trying their best to control the detrimental pollutants in America. Constructive norms and precautions may
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help
defaulters to release the
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waste
in
sparsely
manner.

To recapitulate, this essay discussed both sides of view with my perception.
Therefore
, I do surmise
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other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ways
than taxation are more instrumental than former thoughts.
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17Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some people believe that taxing companies, which cause it, is the best way to reduce industrial pollution while some suggest that there are several other ways to solve this trouble. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
306 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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