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Some people believe that students should study at schools are better than studying in groups. However, others argue that students study at schools are better than they study on their owns. Discuss both views and give your opinion? v.1

Some people believe that students should study at schools are better than studying in groups. However, others argue that students study at schools are better than they study on their owns. v. 1
Many people are holding the view that students should study in group at school and that is lead to a controversial issue with a group of people who think study individual is better. In this essay, i will examine both points and give my own opinion. To begin with, it is irrefutable that pupils gather around can help each other expand their view of the subject they are learning because of different perspective from other classmate. Work in a team can help them separate full passage into a small parts so each person can have more time to concentrate on their mission and added efficiently. Consequently, they share their result and the harvested they get it is not take much times but still actively. On the other hand, however learning by them-self is help their understanding deeply. They can find the information they need immediately, do not have to worry or waiting until the previous person ready. They have the chance also times to find more knowledge by them-self. That process will help them figure out the problem clearly, knows many side of the problem they are facing and also do not concerned about the discussion of other people have made. Naturally, individual study trained students not being depend on others fellows but have to work and gains score personally. In conclusion, both personal study and association study brings benefits nevertheless, on my perspective single study is help learner earn more draws.
Many
people
are holding the view that students should
study
in group at school and
that is
lead to a controversial issue with a group of
people
who
think
study
individual is better. In this essay,
i
will examine both points and give my
own
opinion.

To
begin
with, it is irrefutable that pupils gather around can
help
each
other
expand their view of the subject they are learning
because
of
different
perspective from
other
classmate. Work in a team can
help
them separate full passage into a
small
parts
so
each person can have more time to concentrate on their mission and
added
efficiently
.
Consequently
, they share their result and the harvested they
get
it is not take
much
times
but
still
actively
.

On the
other
hand,
however
learning by them-self is
help
their understanding
deeply
. They can find the information they need immediately, do not
have to
worry or waiting until the previous person ready. They have the chance
also
times to find more knowledge by them-self. That process will
help
them figure out the problem
clearly
, knows
many side
of the problem they are facing and
also
do not
concerned
about the discussion of
other
people
have made.
Naturally
, individual
study
trained students not being
depend
on others fellows
but
have to
work and gains score
personally
.

In conclusion
, both personal
study
and association
study
brings benefits
nevertheless
, on my perspective single
study
is
help
learner earn more draws.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
15Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people believe that students should study at schools are better than studying in groups. However, others argue that students study at schools are better than they study on their owns. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
242 words
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