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Some People believe that students should always learn in a group rather than study individually. To what extent do you? v.1

Some People believe that students should always learn in a group rather than study individually. v. 1
Each person has different ways to learn subject. There is person can study alone without being helped by someone. But there are people feel better learn in a group. I think the best ways to learn is study in a group. Because somebody can ask to the others if here is they do not understand about the lesson. Many people will be comfortable if they are asking to their friends than their teacher. Because with their friends people can ask everything that they wants and for the person explain this subject so that person will be more understand than another friends. Some body usually study in a group will can work together than person like study individually. In group the person can share everything that they know. If the people study individually, its mean some body cannot share with the others person so the people must try to study with themselves. People can focus learning individually but if that happened for long time will make people became lazy because nobody motivated them. If people learn with a group so every person will be motivated by other friends and make a person more memorize about learning. Every people have their own studying preferences and priorities, but many people think learn in a group better than learning alone because Learn in a group make people motivated from the others and it help to remain lesson for long time. The government should our education system should modify our curriculum by adding group discussion.
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ways to
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learn
subject. There is
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person
can
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study
alone without being
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helped
by someone.
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there are
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people
feel better
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learn
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group
. I
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the best ways to
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learn
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study
in a
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group
.
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ask to
the others if here is they do not understand about the lesson.

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Many
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people
will be comfortable if they are
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asking to
their
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friends
than their teacher.
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with their
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friends
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people
can ask everything that they
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wants
and for the
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person
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explain
this subject
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so
that
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person
will be more understand than another
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friends
.
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usually
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study
in a
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group
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will can
work
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together
than
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person
like
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study
individually
. In
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group
the
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person
can share everything that they know.

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people
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study
individually
, its mean
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some body
cannot share with the others
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person
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so
the
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people
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must
try to
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study
with themselves.
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People
can focus learning
individually
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but
if that happened for long time will
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make
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people
became lazy
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because
nobody motivated them. If
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people
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learn
with a
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group
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every
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person
will
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by
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other
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friends
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make
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person
more memorize about learning.

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own
studying preferences and priorities,
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but
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many
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people
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think
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learn
in a
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group
better than learning alone
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because
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Learn
in a
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group
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make
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people
motivated from the others and it
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help
to remain lesson for long time. The
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government
should our education system should modify our curriculum by adding
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group
discussion.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
45Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Mistakes
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IELTS essay Some People believe that students should always learn in a group rather than study individually. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
250 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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