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Some people believe that residents are responsible for the place where they live to be clean and tidy. Others believe that government is the responsible. Discuss both views and give your opinion. v.2

Some people believe that residents are responsible for the place where they live to be clean and tidy. Others believe that government is the responsible. v. 2
It is argued by some people that wherever people live, they should take the responsibility of making it tidy and clean. Others, on the other hand, think that government should own this task. Although I agree that government is responsible for every state, people should take care of their environments because they have direct contact with it. Some people argue that political leaders should ensure cleanliness of people's residential areas. This is because every state's government is responsible for it, meaning they should be in charge of general wellbeing of the masses. For example, the Imo State government set up ENTRACO, a ministry that is saddled with the responsibility of cleaning the entire state. This has helped in maintaining cleanliness in the entire state. Therefore, every state leadership should take this responsibility. On the other hand, others argue that people should take care of their environments because they have direct contact with it. Individuals associate more with where they live, with or without the presence of their leaders. For example, I have lived in a three-bedroom apartment for nine years. Since this time, it has been my job to ensure the overall cleanliness of the compound without waiting for any government. Moreover, my family and I associate more with the internal stimuli. Therefore, people should clean their environments. In conclusion, despite the fact that governments are accountable for the wellness of its citizens, I support the view that it is every individual's job to ensure domestic and environmental cleanliness.
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, they should take the responsibility of making it tidy and clean. Others, on the
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,
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should take care of their environments
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because
they have direct contact with it.

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argue that political leaders should ensure
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cleanliness
of
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people
's residential areas. This is
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because
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is responsible for it, meaning they should be in charge of general
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wellbeing
of the masses.
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, the
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State
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set up
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, a ministry that
is saddled
with the responsibility of cleaning the entire
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state
. This has
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helped
in maintaining
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cleanliness
in the entire
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state
.
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, every
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state
leadership should take this responsibility.

On the
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other
hand, others argue that
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people
should take care of their environments
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because
they have direct contact with it. Individuals associate more with where they
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live
, with or without the presence of their leaders.
For example
, I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lived
in a three-bedroom apartment for nine years. Since this time, it has been my job to ensure the
overall
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cleanliness
of the compound without waiting for any
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government
.
Moreover
, my family and I associate more with the internal stimuli.
Therefore
,
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people
should clean their environments.

In conclusion
, despite the fact that
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governments
are accountable for the wellness of its citizens, I support the view that it is every individual's job to ensure domestic and environmental
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cleanliness
.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
23Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS essay Some people believe that residents are responsible for the place where they live to be clean and tidy. Others believe that government is the responsible. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
249 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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