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Some people believe that residents are responsible for the place where they live to be clean and tidy. Others believe that government is the responsible. Discuss both views and give your opinion. v.5

Some people believe that residents are responsible for the place where they live to be clean and tidy. Others believe that government is the responsible. v. 5
There is an argument about the responsibility of the cleanness of the place where people live. First point of view is, that is the duty of the people who are resident. On the contrast, the others' opinion is, the authors should do such job. In my opinion, I totally agree with the first one, as, the people themselves must throw their rubbish and unwanted things in the places, where it is specialized in collecting wastes. Firstly, people produce a huge number of wastes on a daily basis. These must be put in their places which is their role mainly. Moreover, this action can be considered as a positive social role, which the pubilc can do it easily without further effort. To illustrate that, families initiate an idea that every day one person of the family members will be responsible for taking the bucket away to its place that is allocated by the government. Nevertheless, there is another belief which is, people can rely on the authorized persons in the government to take the rubbish away, because they pay their taxes to take such service and also, there is some private corporations can do this job under the authorization of the government. For instance, the institution can make a contract with a private organization to collect unwanted things and pay for them through the collected taxes of the public. To conclude, the people have to play an active role in the society and support the state be doing small effortless work, also that can give the chance to the operation to afford funds for more important services.
There is an argument about the responsibility of the cleanness of the
place
where
people
live
.
First
point of view is,
that is
the duty of the
people
who are resident. On the contrast, the others' opinion is, the authors should do such job. In my opinion, I
totally
agree
with the
first
one, as, the
people
themselves
must
throw their rubbish and unwanted things in the
places
, where it
is specialized
in collecting wastes.

Firstly
,
people
produce a huge number of wastes on a daily basis. These
must
be put
in their
places
which is their role
mainly
.
Moreover
, this action can
be considered
as a
positive
social role, which the
pubilc
can do it
easily
without
further
effort. To illustrate that, families initiate an
idea
that every day one person of the family members will be responsible for taking the bucket away to its
place
that
is allocated
by the
government
.

Nevertheless
, there is another belief which is,
people
can rely on the authorized persons in the
government
to take the rubbish away,
because
they pay their taxes to take such service and
also
, there is
some
private corporations can do this job under the authorization of the
government
.
For instance
, the institution can
make
a contract with a private organization to collect unwanted things and pay for them through the collected taxes of the public.

To conclude
, the
people
have to
play an active role in the society and support the state be doing
small
effortless work,
also
that can give the chance to the operation to afford funds for more
important
services.
14Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
10Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people believe that residents are responsible for the place where they live to be clean and tidy. Others believe that government is the responsible. v. 5

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
266 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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