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Forests are the lungs of the earth. Destruction of the world’s forest amounts to death of the world we currently know. To what extent do you agree or disagree. v.1

Forests are the lungs of the earth. Destruction of the world’s forest amounts to death of the world we currently know. v. 1
Environment protection has been a topic that is widely discussed in the today’s world. In fact, it is vital that we protect the forests of the world which play a key role in balancing the bio- diversity. While I completely agree that the damages we do the jungles will subsequently affect the mankind, this essay will analyze how the destruction of trees would impact people and the world at large. Global warming is the worst result of the destruction of trees. It is known that trees absorb carbon dioxide in the environment. With the advancement of humans, machinery have been commonly used in every household and every business. This results in emitting more and more carbon to the environment. Thus, the trees play an important role in absorbing the carbon dioxide which are being emitted by machine and vehicles. When trees do not have enough capacity to absorb all CO2 in the environment, it finally damages the ozone and brings adverse consequences like rising sea levels, tsunami etc. Another concern is the loss of habitat to wild animals. With the growth of population, people tend to acquire more land which are originally owned by the wild-life. For example, in countries like Sri Lanka and India, people destroy forests to cultivate crops. Even though, it supports people in the short term, I would bring them more consequences in the long run. If this continues, elephants, tigers, lions who made this world more beautiful will be listed as endangered animals and the future generations will never have an opportunity to see these animals in real life. In conclusion, destruction we do to jungles today would definitely paves the way to the destruction of the man-kind tomorrow. Hence, it is utterly important that we protect the environment; trees, animals, water streams and everything that has been given to us by Mother Nature.
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Environment
protection has been a topic
that is
widely
discussed in the
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today
’s
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world
. In fact, it is vital that we protect the forests of the
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world
which play a key role in balancing the bio- diversity. While I completely
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agree
that the damages we do the jungles will
subsequently
affect the mankind, this essay will analyze how the
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destruction
of
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trees
would impact
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people
and the
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world
at large.

Global warming is the worst result of the
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destruction
of
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trees
. It
is known
that
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trees
absorb carbon dioxide in the
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environment
. With the advancement of humans, machinery have been
commonly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
in every household and every business. This results in emitting more and more carbon to the
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environment
.
Thus
, the
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trees
play an
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important
role in absorbing the carbon dioxide which are
being emitted
by machine and vehicles. When
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trees
do not have
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enough
capacity to absorb all CO2 in the
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environment
, it
finally
damages the ozone and brings adverse
The usual preposition to use after "consequences" is not "like". Did you mean "consequences of", "consequences for", or "consequences on"?
consequences like
rising sea levels, tsunami etc.

Another concern is the loss of habitat to wild
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animals
. With the growth of population,
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people
tend to acquire more land which are
originally
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owned
by the wild-life.
For example
, in countries like Sri Lanka and India,
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people
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destroy
forests to cultivate crops.
Even though
, it supports
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people
in the short term, I would bring them more consequences in the long run. If this continues, elephants, tigers, lions who made this
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world
more
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beautiful
will
be listed
as endangered
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animals
and the future generations will never have an opportunity to
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see
these
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animals
in real life.

In conclusion
,
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destruction
we do to jungles
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today
would definitely
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paves
the way to the
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destruction
of the
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man
-kind tomorrow.
Hence
, it is
utterly
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important
that we protect the
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environment
;
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trees
,
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animals
, water streams and everything that has been
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
to us by Mother Nature.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
27Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS essay Forests are the lungs of the earth. Destruction of the world’s forest amounts to death of the world we currently know. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
309 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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