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Some people believe that price is the only consideration when buying something. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.3

Some people believe that price is the only consideration when buying something. v. 3
Nowadays, procuring item criteria vary from person to person. Many people hold the view that price is the sole criterion in purchasing products. I strongly oppose the given statement, and I will express my opinion throughout this essay. First of all, the payment is not the sole identifier of the quality of the products. Although the expense in purchasing items is a decisive factor, it cannot be the most significant thing. From an economic view, many people buy numerous items at a lower cost in spite of their high quality. To cite an example, nowadays, a vast number of people who are fans of a particular brand wait in long ques and acquire expensive products due to its brand name, while many other items have a higher quality with reasonable prices. Secondly, from my point of view, demand is the leading principles for purchasing products. One' s requirement represents a vital role in its decision to acquire a product. Thus, when someone does not require an item, they will be reluctant to obtain it. Research findings confirm that there are four main principles in purchasing items, which the first one is the need and the last one is the cost. Therefore price cannot be the sole consideration. In conclusion, the price is one of the factors in buying things. However, it definitely cannot identify the quality of the goods. Moreover, the requirement plays a prominent role in this matter. I dissent with that price is the only consideration in obtaining products.
Nowadays, procuring
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criteria vary from person to person.
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Many
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people
hold the view that
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price
is the sole criterion in purchasing
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products
. I
strongly
oppose the
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given
statement, and I will express my opinion throughout this essay.

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, the payment is not the sole identifier of the
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quality
of the
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products
. Although the expense in purchasing
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items
is a decisive factor, it cannot be the most significant thing. From an economic view,
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many
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people
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buy
numerous
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items
at a lower cost
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in spite of
their high
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quality
. To cite an example, nowadays, a vast number of
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people
who are fans of a particular brand wait in long ques and acquire expensive
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products
due to its brand name, while
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many
other
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items
have a higher
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quality
with reasonable prices.

Secondly
, from my point of view, demand is the leading principles for purchasing
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products
.
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#039; s requirement represents a vital role in its decision to acquire a
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product
.
Thus
, when someone does not require an
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item
, they will be reluctant to obtain it. Research findings confirm that there are four main principles in purchasing
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items
, which the
first
one is the need and the last one is the cost.
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Therefore
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price
cannot be the sole consideration.

In conclusion
, the
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price
is one of the factors in buying things.
However
, it definitely cannot identify the
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quality
of the
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goods
.
Moreover
, the requirement plays a prominent role in this matter. I dissent with that
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price
is the
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only
consideration in obtaining
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products
.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
20Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people believe that price is the only consideration when buying something. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
251 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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