Generally, few percentages of the population consider money as a
primary element when purchasing a product or service. I agree to the
statement as wealth always plays an important role in people’s life and it
is safe to spend money on necessary goods than the luxuries.
On one hand, advertisement plays a vital role in marketing a product by
pressurizing people to buy things despite of their capacity to afford.
People are mesmerized by the adverts shown in television, roads,
banners, shops and lose their ability to re-think if the product is worth
the money. It resists them to categorise the products based on their
quality and durability. For instance, people are habituated to spend
plenty of money on any product or services where discounts are offered
irrespective of its necessity.
On the other hand, mankind now a days are interested in owning luxury
products even if their account balance does not favour. However, banks
have found the solution. They provide credit cards which helps people to
achieve their desires and pushes them into debt. There are situations
where money should not be the primary consideration, for instance, in
emergency cases related to hospitals. Another demonstration is, people
buy luxurious homes by taking loans though cost effective homes are
available in the market and struggle to repay.
I would like to conclude stating that, money needs to be spent wisely
and it should be the primary consideration before investing into any
product or service, as wealth is just a variable and not a constant.
Generally
, few percentages of the population consider
money
as a
primary
element when purchasing a
product
or service. I
agree
to
the
statement as wealth always plays an
important
role in
people’s
life and it
is
safe to spend
money
on necessary
goods
than the luxuries.
On one hand, advertisement plays a vital role in marketing a
product
by
pressurizing
people
to
buy
things
despite of
their capacity to afford.
People
are mesmerized
by the adverts shown in television, roads,
banners, shops and lose their ability to re-
think
if the
product
is worth
the
money
. It resists them to
categorise
the
products
based on
their
quality
and durability.
For instance
,
people
are habituated
to
spend
plenty
of
money
on any
product
or services where discounts
are offered
irrespective
of its necessity.
On the other hand
, mankind
now a days
are interested
in owning luxury
products
even if their account balance does not
favour
.
However
, banks
have
found the solution. They provide credit cards which
helps
people
to
achieve
their desires and pushes them into debt. There are
situations
where
money
should not be the primary consideration,
for instance
, in
emergency
cases related to hospitals. Another demonstration is,
people
buy
luxurious homes by taking loans though cost effective homes are
available
in the market and struggle to repay.
I would like
to conclude
stating that,
money
needs to
be spent
wisely
and it should be the primary consideration
before
investing into any
product
or service, as wealth is
just
a variable and not a constant.
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