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Some people believe that planning for the future is a waste of time because they think that focusing on the present is more important. To what do you extent agree or disagree? v.1

Some people believe that planning for the future is a waste of time because they think that focusing on the present is more important. To what do you extent agree or disagree? v. 1
Some people believe that making future plans is a futile exercise, and that focusing on the present moment is more important. Personally, I feel that both perspectives are of equal importance. On the one hand, I believe that it is important to plan for the future. People need to have goals and dreams to strive towards in order to have a sense of purpose and direction in their lives. And to achieve and fulfil these goals and be successful, it is essential that they make plans. I am certain that any successful businessman, or millionaire, will tell you that one of the key elements in their success was their careful planning for the future. However, the future is always uncertain, so it is also necessary to have a backup plan when things do not work out as expected. On the other hand, it is also extremely important to maintain focus on the present. Many people would claim that there are far too many factors that influence our future, and therefore it is out of our control. So, it is necessary that we stay focused on the present moment in order to be able to react and respond appropriately to our current situation and needs. If you are too focused on the future, you may not make very good decisions about your present life. Furthermore, nobody knows when their life will end, so it is also important to live your life to the fullest in each passing moment. In conclusion, I believe it is important to maintain a balance between planning for the future and staying focused on the present moment. It is necessary to make plans in order to achieve goals, but it is also necessary to be flexible and be able to adapt to the current changing situations and circumstances.
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is a futile exercise, and that focusing on the
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moment is more
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.
Personally
, I feel that both perspectives are of equal importance.

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to
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for the
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.
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People
need to have goals and dreams to strive towards in order to have a sense of purpose and direction in their
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lives
. And to achieve and fulfil these goals and be successful, it is essential that they
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make
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plans
. I am certain that any successful businessman, or millionaire, will
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tell
you that one of the key elements in their success was their careful planning for the
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.
However
, the
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is always uncertain,
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when things do not work out as
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would claim that there are far too
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factors that influence our
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, and
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moment in order to be able to react and respond
appropriately
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situation and needs. If you are too focused on the
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life.
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your life to the fullest in each passing moment.

In conclusion
, I believe it is
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important
to maintain a balance between planning for the
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future
and staying focused on the
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present
moment. It is
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necessary
to
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in order to achieve goals,
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to be flexible and be able to adapt to the
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current
changing situations and circumstances.
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The man who does not know other languages, unless he is a man of genius, necessarily has deficiencies in his ideas.
Victor Hugo

IELTS essay Some people believe that planning for the future is a waste of time because they think that focusing on the present is more important. To what do you extent agree or disagree? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
301 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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