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Some people believe that online reading material should only be used for a child to learn to read, whereas others believe only printed materials should be used. Discuss both views, and give your own opinion. v.1

Some people believe that online reading material should only be used for a child to learn to read, whereas others believe only printed materials should be used. v. 1
According to some, children learn to read from online content because of its convenience, while others argued that, for reading purposes, the printed material should be consumed. In my opinion, printed material is a more reliable option because it makes children more focussed and provide better understanding. On the one hand, many people think that online reading is easily accessible, convenient, and usually free. Children can read their favourite books from anywhere, like from home, during travelling, or at work by using their mobile device. Moreover, many reading materials available at either no or minimal cost. For example, according to a survey conducted in one of the London university reveals that over 60%of students prefer to read their textbook online and don't like to buy or burrow the printed version. However, I believe that it's hard to stay focused while reading on any digital nomad. On the other hand, the student becomes more focussed while reading a book, article, or magazine. Additionally, written materials are more authentic and reliable and provide an in-depth understanding of the subject comparatively. According to many researchers, while reading online, it's effortless to distract and left the reading in the middle and navigate away, which wastes one's valuable time. Current research suggests that reading online results in lower understanding and less critical reflection. In conclusion, although, on-screen reading materials are a more feasible approach, I firmly believe reading a book provides an in-depth understanding and less distraction.
According to
some
, children learn to read from
online
content
because
of its convenience, while others argued that, for
reading
purposes, the printed
material
should
be consumed
. In my opinion, printed
material
is a more reliable option
because
it
makes
children more focussed and provide better understanding.

On the one hand,
many
people
think
that
online
reading
is
easily
accessible, convenient, and
usually
free. Children can read their
favourite
books from anywhere, like from home, during travelling, or at work by using their mobile device.
Moreover
,
many
reading
materials
available at either
no
or minimal cost.
For example
, according to a survey conducted in one of the London university reveals that over 60%of students prefer to read their textbook
online
and don't like to
buy
or burrow the printed version.
However
, I believe that it's
hard
to stay focused while
reading
on any digital nomad.

On the other hand
, the student becomes more focussed while
reading
a book, article, or magazine.
Additionally
, written
materials
are more authentic and reliable and provide an in-depth understanding of the subject
comparatively
. According to
many
researchers, while
reading
online
, it's effortless to distract and
left
the
reading
in the middle and navigate away, which wastes one's valuable time.
Current
research suggests that
reading
online
results in lower understanding and less critical reflection.

In conclusion
, although, on-screen
reading
materials
are a more feasible approach, I
firmly
believe
reading
a book provides an in-depth understanding and less distraction.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
20Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people believe that online reading material should only be used for a child to learn to read, whereas others believe only printed materials should be used. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
242 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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