Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree and disagree with this statement? v. 104 v.31
Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.  v. 104 v. 31
These days, people strongly express about having a plethora of options in almost all aspects of human life. While some vouch for career choices, others simply compare ease of living. Nonetheless, I strongly agree with the given statement. In this essay, I shall explain the reasons behind my agreement with aforementioned fact and would provide examples as required.
To begin with, In the old days, there used to only a few options to make a living, as such, people used to work in either agriculture or in the army. However, the scenario, at present, is completely different. For example, children can now choose their future job vertical and can actually start preparing for it at a very young age. Moreover, if they do not like their sector of employment, it is extremely easy to make a switch. Furthermore, not only they can swap pathways, they can actually take a break and rethink their priorities at any time.
Moving further, now in terms of livelihood options, starting from transportation to up until living facilities, the possibilities are enormous. For instance, be it a central air conditioned building, or luxury air travel, people can pick between different alternatives. Additionally, even there is a possibility to tour the space.
In conclusion, as explained in the above sections, it is clearly certain that the range of choices available has now been many times higher than the old days. Hence, I completely agree with the given statement and indeed would recommend to think twice before taking advantage of picking any. 
These days,  
people
  strongly
 express about having a plethora of options in almost all aspects of human life. While  
some
 vouch for career choices, others  
simply
 compare  
ease
 of living. Nonetheless, I  
strongly
  agree
 with the  
given
 statement. In this essay, I shall  
explain
 the reasons behind my agreement with aforementioned fact and would provide examples as required.
To  
begin
 with, In the  
old
 days, there  
used
 to  
only
 a few options to  
make
 a living, as such,  
people
  used
 to work in either agriculture or in the army.  
However
, the scenario, at present, is completely  
different
.  
For example
, children can  
now
 choose their future job vertical and can actually  
start
 preparing for it at a  
very
 young age.  
Moreover
, if they do not like their sector of employment, it is  
extremely
 easy to  
make
 a switch.  
Furthermore
, not  
only
 they can swap pathways, they can actually take a break and rethink their priorities at any time.
Moving  
further
,  
now
 in terms of livelihood options, starting from transportation to up until living facilities, the possibilities are enormous.  
For instance
, be it a central  
air conditioned
 building, or luxury air travel,  
people
 can pick between  
different
 alternatives.  
Additionally
, even there is a possibility to tour the space. 
In conclusion
, as  
explained
 in the above sections, it is  
clearly
 certain that the range of choices available has  
now
 been  
many
 times higher than the  
old
 days.  
Hence
, I completely  
agree
 with the  
given
 statement and  
indeed
 would recommend to  
think
 twice  
before
 taking advantage of picking any. 
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