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Some people believe subjects with practical applications are better, however, others think subjects that are theoretical are better. Discuss both views v.1

Some people believe subjects with practical applications are better, however, others think subjects that are theoretical are better. 1
Whether to choose a theoretical or practical subject is becoming increasingly controversial. While some people hold the belief that it is beneficial to take subjects with practical applications, others consider theoretical subjects more appropriate. This essay will discuss both views in depth. Applied subjects are preferred by an increasing number of people as they have reason to believe that these subjects will prepare them to be better equipped to face the challenges at the workplace. Subjects like home science, for example, allow students to cook different types of dish under timed conditions where a similar level of expertise would be expected from them at their place of work. People therefore find these subjects to be providing a more realistic approach, since they are directly related to the real life tasks which they would most certainly encounter in their future career and hence, are better prepared. In contrast to people who favour practical learning are those who believe subjects rich in theory are more effective. This is because it is fundamental to master the concept well before stepping into practicing what you have learnt. For example, profession such as medicine not only require medical students to have a clear understanding of the subjects studied, but also to memorize key information which is substantial for better practice. Without these basic knowledge, many professionals would lack the flexibility needed to manage complex situations, resulting in poor performances. In conclusion, although some people believe subjects with practical applications are better as they provide students with exposure that will mimic their future position, others maintain that subjects with theoretical aspect are more valuable, as students are accustomed to basic knowledge which will improve their chances of success.
Whether to choose a theoretical or
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some
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people
hold the belief that it is beneficial to take
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subjects
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applications, others consider theoretical
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subjects
more appropriate. This essay will discuss both views in depth.

Applied
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subjects
are preferred
by an increasing number of
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people
as they have reason to believe that these
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subjects
will prepare them to be
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better
equipped to face the challenges at the workplace.
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Subjects
like home science,
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allow
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students
to cook
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different
types of dish under timed conditions where a similar level of expertise would be
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expected
from them at their place of work.
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People
therefore
find these
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subjects
to be providing a more realistic approach, since they are
directly
related to the real life tasks which they would most
certainly
encounter in their future career and
hence
, are
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better
prepared.

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to
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people
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favour
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practical
learning are those who believe
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rich in theory are more effective. This is
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it is fundamental to master the concept well
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before
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, profession such as medicine not
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require medical
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students
to have a
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clear
understanding of the
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subjects
studied,
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but
also
to memorize key information which is substantial for
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better
practice. Without these basic knowledge,
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many
professionals would lack the flexibility needed to manage complex situations, resulting in poor performances.

In conclusion
, although
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some
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people
believe
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subjects
with
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practical
applications are
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better
as they provide
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students
with exposure that will mimic their future position, others maintain that
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subjects
with theoretical aspect are more valuable, as
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students
are accustomed
to basic knowledge which will
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improve
their chances of success.
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IELTS essay Some people believe subjects with practical applications are better, however, others think subjects that are theoretical are better. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
282 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
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