Many people think that prisoners should be allowed to do some part-time unpaid works which will improve their mental condition. I agree with this view, but I think that rather than doing unpaid work, they should be involved in low-paid works so that they will be motivated to work more.
Keeping all the prisoners in jail is not only costly for the government but also bad for the prisoners. If a person is kept in jail for many years without the involvement in physical work, he will not only suffer from mental disorder, but also suffer from physical weaknesses. But, if he is involved in any outside work, he will be in touch with many good people and his mental stress will be lower. It is likely that after getting the bail, he will be a good person.
Although many people argue that prisoners should not get paid for their works as they are criminals, I think that they should get a small payment for their work as it will increase their motivation to work hard. Besides, they can save this money which will help them meet their expenses after getting release. However, authority should be very careful before selecting the prisoners who will be allowed to do job as serious criminals might do harms to the society. Another noticeable benefits from allowing the prisoners to work is that over the period of imprisonment, they will be skilled in a particular area which will help them get job after getting bail.
In conclusion, some prisoners should be permitted to do low-paid jobs that will not only keep them happy mentally but also make them productive for future.
Many
people
think
that
prisoners
should be
allowed
to do
some
part-time unpaid works which will
improve
their mental condition. I
agree
with this view,
but
I
think
that
rather
than doing unpaid
work
, they should
be involved
in low-paid works
so
that they will
be motivated
to
work
more.
Keeping all the
prisoners
in jail is not
only
costly for the
government
but
also
bad
for the
prisoners
. If a person is
kept
in jail for
many
years without the involvement in physical
work
, he will not
only
suffer from mental disorder,
but
also
suffer from physical weaknesses.
But
, if he
is involved
in any outside
work
, he will be in touch with
many
good
people
and his mental
stress
will be
lower
. It is likely that after getting the bail, he will be a
good
person.
Although
many
people
argue that
prisoners
should not
get
paid for their works as they are criminals, I
think
that they should
get
a
small
payment for their
work
as it will increase their motivation to
work
hard
.
Besides
, they can save this money which will
help
them
meet
their expenses after getting release.
However
, authority should be
very
careful
before
selecting the
prisoners
who will be
allowed
to do job as serious criminals might do harms to the society. Another noticeable benefits from allowing the
prisoners
to
work
is that over the period of imprisonment, they will
be skilled
in a particular area which will
help
them
get
job after getting bail.
In conclusion
,
some
prisoners
should
be permitted
to do low-paid jobs that will not
only
keep
them happy mentally
but
also
make
them productive for future.
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