It is often thought that there is a lot of salary given out on space investigation. However, some of them are of the opinion that the wealth should be provided on more important things, such as the developments on our planet. In my point of view, I believe that the regime should spend the money on increasing the living standards of our world rather than the space research.
First of all, there is a lot of pollution caused over the years, which can be damaging to our environment and the rest of the creatures. The reason for the huge amount of waste is that there is being less done to avoid these circumstances. For example, a lot of businesses and other factories are still throwing away their waste in the sea without receiving any warning from the regime. All in all, to decrease the amount of this impurity, wealth should be invested to search for any solutions.
Second of all, there are still a lot of humans who are being homeless or do not receive clear water. The reason for this is the unhygiene situation or the scarcity in wealth. The government can invest for those people to make their life a bit predictable. For example, installing water pipes by receiving clear water, to reduce the chance for any illness. So, this way the money can be provided in more useful products to give positive changes.
To conclude, I strongly believe that the money should be spent on improving the living standards on earth because it will decrease the pollution of our planet and the poor people will receive a possibility to live a healthy life.
It is
often
thought
that there is a
lot
of salary
given
out on space investigation.
However
,
some
of them are of the opinion that the wealth should
be provided
on more
important
things, such as the developments on our planet. In my point of view, I believe that the regime should spend the money on increasing the living standards of our world
rather
than the space research.
First of all
, there is a
lot
of pollution caused over the years, which can be damaging to our environment and the rest of the creatures. The reason for the huge amount of waste is that there is being less done to avoid these circumstances.
For example
, a
lot
of businesses and other factories are
still
throwing away their waste in the sea without receiving any warning from the regime. All in all, to decrease the amount of this impurity, wealth should
be invested
to search for any solutions.
Second of all, there are
still
a
lot
of humans who are being homeless or do not receive
clear
water.
The reason for this is
the
unhygiene
situation or the scarcity in wealth. The
government
can invest for those
people
to
make
their life a bit predictable.
For example
, installing water pipes by receiving
clear
water, to
reduce
the chance for any illness.
So
, this way the money can
be provided
in more useful products to give
positive
changes
.
To conclude
, I
strongly
believe that the money should
be spent
on improving the living standards on earth
because
it will decrease the pollution of our planet and the poor
people
will receive a possibility to
live
a healthy life.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes