Some people believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any job they want. Others feel that men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs which are nor suitable for women. What is your opinion? v.5
Some people believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any job they want. Others feel that men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs which are nor suitable for women. What is your opinion? v. 5
Many believe that men are women are born differently and possess different abilities. Consequently, there are some jobs that should be done by men alone and some jobs that should be the domain of women. There are, however, many who disagree with previous system of thoughts and believe that men and women are created same; hence, both genders should be able do any job they want. There are obvious flaws in both system of thoughts. Nevertheless, I believe women should be able to do any job they want, provided that they meet the required criteria.
First, we see women in almost every field, working toe-to-toe with men, and sometimes even outperform their male counterparts. For example, chancellor of Germany, Angela Merkel, who has done remarkable job at handling many sketchy situations at national and international level. Many more examples like this can be given. Therefore, it is quite right to imply that women can do any job they want, should they choose to do it.
However, we must accept the scientific fact that biologically men and women are different. Implication of this is that jobs where brute force or strength is more important are not well suited for women. For instance, working on an offshore oilrig. In this case, workers not only have to live far away on site in the ocean, but also possess certain physical fitness and strength to perform various tasks.
In my opinion, when it comes to general population, both genders are equal intellectually and physically. There are many fitness regimes, which negate the biological differences in the gender. However, at the advanced level such as elite athletes, no matter how much you train, biological differences can be very clearly seen. At this level, women will lack behind their male counterpart.
Finally, the issue whether men and women are equal is complex. Experts are debating over this for long time. Should the women choose to work in any field they want? The answer is resounding yes. If they have all required skillset, then there should not be any discrimination based on gender.
Many
believe that
men
are
women
are born
differently
and possess
different
abilities.
Consequently
, there are
some
jobs
that should
be done
by
men
alone and
some
jobs
that should be the domain of
women
. There are,
however
,
many
who disagree with previous system of thoughts and believe that
men
and
women
are created
same;
hence
, both genders should be
able do
any
job
they
want
. There are obvious flaws in both system of thoughts.
Nevertheless
, I believe
women
should be able to do any
job
they
want
, provided that they
meet
the required criteria.
First
, we
see
women
in almost every field, working toe-to-toe with
men
, and
sometimes
even outperform their male counterparts.
For example
, chancellor of Germany, Angela Merkel, who has done remarkable
job
at handling
many
sketchy situations at national and international level.
Many
more examples like this can be
given
.
Therefore
, it is quite right to imply that
women
can do any
job
they
want
, should they choose to do it.
However
, we
must
accept the scientific fact that
biologically
men
and
women
are
different
. Implication of this is that
jobs
where brute force or strength is more
important
are not well suited for
women
.
For instance
, working on an offshore
oilrig
.
In this case
, workers not
only
have to
live
far away on site in the ocean,
but
also
possess certain physical fitness and strength to perform various tasks.
In my opinion, when it
comes
to general population, both genders are equal
intellectually
and
physically
. There are
many
fitness regimes, which negate the biological differences in the gender.
However
, at the advanced level such as elite athletes, no matter how much you train, biological differences can be
very
clearly
seen
. At this level,
women
will lack behind their male counterpart.
Finally
, the issue whether
men
and
women
are equal is complex. Experts are debating over this for long time. Should the
women
choose to work in any field they
want
? The answer is resounding yes. If they have all required
skillset
, then there should not be any discrimination based on gender.
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28Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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