Leisure activities are an inevitable part in ones’ lives. Although how to spend spare time is our own choice, there has been heated debates over whether changes in common hobbies are trendy or for the sake of personal interests. I am more inclined towards the latter view.
Advocates of the view that what indicates a prevalent pastime is the latest trend or fashion may argue that it is more likely to be impressionable, especially in this globalisation era. Children and teenagers, in particular, are easily tempted to whatever activities are popular among their peers. Fidget spinning would be a fine example of this; youngsters seemed to have been crazy about it for a while and soon get rid of it to opt for another trendy pastime. Likewise, we adults are not an exception. What those not living in a Western country are probably wearing on special occasions are nothing but suits and ceremonial dresses that not all actually find comfortable with.
I am in favour of the idea that personal pleasure is more a priority when people pick up a certain hobby than solely following trends. An obvious argument for this is that many activities cannot be called trends due to the fact that they have been around for a long time. Reading is one of the most prevalent interests, and a true bookworm reads books regardless of whether it is trendy or not. From an opposite angle, even when adopting a popular hobby, if a person finds it suits one’s passion, it is sensible for the picked hobby to be considered an indication of one’s need.
In conclusion, while trends may contribute to the way people spend their spare time, I side with the perspective that hobbies are a true reflection of people’s needs. 
Leisure activities are an inevitable part in  
ones’
  lives
. Although how to spend spare time is our  
own
 choice, there has  
been heated
 debates over whether  
changes
 in common  
hobbies
 are trendy or for the sake of personal interests. I am more inclined towards the latter view.
Advocates of the view that what indicates a prevalent pastime is the latest  
trend
 or fashion may argue that it is more likely to be impressionable,  
especially
 in this  
globalisation
 era. Children and  
teenagers
,  
in particular
, are  
easily
 tempted to whatever activities are popular among their peers. Fidget spinning would be a fine example of this; youngsters seemed to have been crazy about it for a while and  
soon
  get
 rid of it to opt for another trendy pastime.  
Likewise
, we adults are not an exception. What those not living in a Western country are  
probably
 wearing on special occasions are nothing  
but
 suits and ceremonial dresses that not all actually find comfortable with.
I am in  
favour
 of the  
idea
 that personal pleasure is more a priority when  
people
 pick up a certain  
hobby
 than  
solely
 following  
trends
. An obvious argument for this is that  
many
 activities cannot  
be called
  trends
 due to the fact that they have been around for a long time. Reading is one of the most prevalent interests, and a true bookworm reads books regardless of whether it is trendy or not. From an opposite angle, even when adopting a popular  
hobby
, if a person finds it suits one’s passion, it is sensible for the picked  
hobby
 to  
be considered
 an indication of one’s need. 
In conclusion
, while  
trends
 may contribute to the way  
people
 spend their spare time, I side with the perspective that  
hobbies
 are a true reflection of  
people
’s needs. 
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