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Some people believe that it is good for students to have the same teacher for several years. Others think students benefit more from having new teachers each year. Which do you think is better? Give specific reasons to support your opinion. v.1

Some people believe that it is good for students to have the same teacher for several years. Others think students benefit more from having new teachers each year. Which do you think is better? Give specific reasons to support your opinion. v. 1
People manage their education in different ways. Some think going to the same teacher for years, whereas some prefer to learn from different teachers on different occasions. I personally believe it is better to receive education from the same teacher for a long period. It is obvious that it varies from person to person regarding the depth of knowledge. Various people have knowledge over various fields. In that case, it can be helpful for the students to learn from new teachers. Undoubtedly, that will be crucial to increase their knowledge level. Additionally, the new teacher can be an expert in his field of knowledge which he can share with all the pupils. Therefore, it will play a vital role to widen their domain of wisdom too. If the students don't have any issues about accommodating with new surroundings, they should prefer to visit new teachers for schooling. However, there can be a contradiction of opinion as well regarding the previous one. Since there are so many introvert students who don't like to change the environment regularly. Thus, it can be harmful for them to cope with the new teaching method of the new teachers. Moreover, if the students can realize the teaching technique of a particular teacher, it is not essential to suggest them any new teacher. Rather, that decision might cost their career. To conclude, it is evident that taking a lesson from the same teacher each year can be a fruitful approach for the students. So preferring the same teacher for a certain period is an effective way to teach the students rather than recommending them new teachers.
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students
to learn from
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knowledge
level.
Additionally
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teacher
can be an expert in his field of
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knowledge
which he can share with all the pupils.
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students
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.
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students
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teacher
, it is not essential to suggest them any
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new
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teacher
.
Rather
, that decision might cost their career.

To conclude
, it is evident that taking a lesson from the same
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teacher
each year can be a fruitful approach for the
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students
.
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for a certain period is an effective way to teach the
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rather
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.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that it is good for students to have the same teacher for several years. Others think students benefit more from having new teachers each year. Which do you think is better? Give specific reasons to support your opinion. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
270 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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