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Some people believe that it is good for students to have the same teacher for several years. Others think students benefit more from having new teachers each year. Which do you think is better? Give specific reasons to support your opinion. v.3

Some people believe that it is good for students to have the same teacher for several years. Others think students benefit more from having new teachers each year. Which do you think is better? Give specific reasons to support your opinion. v. 3
The teacher plays an essential role in all students' life. Many people think that students can get more learning advantages with only one tutor for some period, while others believe that a new coach for every term is very helpful for students in the learning system. I believed that study each year with a new lecturer is beneficial for students. In the following paragraphs, I will give some more detail about my opinion. Firstly, every teacher has different ideas and strategies for teaching. When students study with more than one tutor, they enjoy the course. Moreover, pupils can be learning something new about some stuff such as people's behaviour, new information and many more. For example, students stay with patience in the class and understand carefully because they are not familiar with the new teacher. This is why it is beneficial for students to study with a new lecturer every period. On the other hand, if students have been emotionally attached to the previous professor then they could not connect with the current coach. New teachers might not be able to understand each student's learning capacity, thus teachers may not give their students a good teaching lesson. For instance, if a pupil is weak in study but the teacher may not get that which method is useful for that student just because it is a new student. So these are the disadvantages to study with new teachers. In conclusion, the student can get more information with new educators. In my opinion, learn new things with a new tutor every year is a fantastic idea. Each school should be made this process for learning.
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period, while others believe that a
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coach for every term is
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helpful for
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in the
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system. I believed that
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each year with a
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lecturer is beneficial for
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students
. In the following paragraphs, I will give
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more detail about my opinion.

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, every
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ideas
and strategies for teaching. When
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students
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with more than one tutor, they enjoy the course.
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, pupils can be
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something
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. This is why it is beneficial for
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lecturer every period.

On the other hand
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current
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might not be able to understand each student's
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capacity,
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may not give their
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.
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with
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teachers.

In conclusion
, the
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student
can
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get
more information with
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educators. In my opinion, learn
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new
things with a
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tutor every year is a fantastic
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. Each school should
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this process for
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.
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8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people believe that it is good for students to have the same teacher for several years. Others think students benefit more from having new teachers each year. Which do you think is better? Give specific reasons to support your opinion. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
273 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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